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EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!
Excellent story!!!
Not a fan of cheating or swinging but you did a good job on this story.
Hopefully it doesn't become emotionally complicated because for women, great sex usually ends up with strong feelings of attachment...or love.
Nicely done.
Those who ridicule should should read your personal comments. Nicely done while avoiding trashy words and exaggerated body parts.
An excellent love story
I like the way the author let us in on the thought process of this loving married couple. I believe she answered the question of why a perfectly happy married couple would ever consider extra-marital sex with another person (or people.) It isn't about being a "wimpy cuck", as so many who comment on these stories seem to believe. It is about love and trust and letting go of petty jealousy and insecurity. Well done, kristensmith4u.
Love your stories!
'What if' is an excellent follow up to 'House Guest'. I especially like the succinct yet erotically-charged writing which evokes titillation and excitement. You don't linger too much in the sex scenes, yet each word is delivers impact by conveying passion, sexual tension and ultimate release within limited prose. It is easy to understand through your writing that the POV of a woman does not focus on the anatomy but rather the blissful ministrations of it.
Aside from a few, minor editing niggles, you are a skilled writer who is accomplished beyond doubt.
I am a male and would love to read more of your offerings, please keep it up!
cantabidebyit
You shouldn't be reading wife-sharing stories if you're "not" into wife-sharing. I mean, why would a KKK member partake in a Black Panther parade. Methinks, you secretly wish to share your wife, even clean her creampie once her lover has deposited it, after a bareback pounding you cannot deliver yourself...
Excelent story!
Kristen, you have a gift for telling an erotic story. As another said, you did not have to use all the vulgar words but you got the emotions across. My biggest question in the beginning was...Did she want to go with her husband's friend or not? Seems like she was conflicted to just stay with her husband. But seemingly in the end, she enjoyed the experience. Your bio mentioned about time constraints. I wish you had more time to write. You mentioned about editing. You did very well because I harp on it here constantly. I only found about 2 places where the wrong word was used. A story is much easier to read when the reader doesn't have to stop and figure out what word was supposed to be there.
Of course, don't listen to the Anonymous naysayers. They don't like anybody's work.
Of course I gave you 5*'s.
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