Although I also feel like another sex scene. It's found a good ending point Hellkite. Some of the stories on here try to squeeze in many more because you lose the background story. The erotic parts as a result lose more than half their value no matter which way you look at it.
Brilliant! One of the absolute best I've read in any of the genres!
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Good start
Good start hope that the story continues
Although I also feel like another sex scene. It's found a good ending point Hellkite. Some of the stories on here try to squeeze in many more because you lose the background story. The erotic parts as a result lose more than half their value no matter which way you look at it.
Brilliant! One of the absolute best I've read in any of the genres!
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