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by Hellkite04/14/14

Good start

Good start hope that the story continues

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by Anonymous05/24/14

Although I also feel like another sex scene. It's found a good ending point Hellkite. Some of the stories on here try to squeeze in many more because you lose the background story. The erotic parts as a result lose more than half their value no matter which way you look at it.
Brilliant! One of the absolute best I've read in any of the genres!

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