Lea's Capture Ch. 02

I can't wait to read the rest!

Great start !!

the writing flowed beautifully .The subject matter captured me straight away .Can't wait for more !

well...

Somehow I don't think his carrot and stick act actually worked. Its just buried her rebellion, its still there under her skin. I mean sure she knows how bad it could be now, but that just means she has to be that much more patient.

Stepping up.

Great writing. I love the way you are stepping up the pace. Poison was an interesting innovation.

Good start

Would appreciate it if you could make the chapters longer and that would give you a chance to develop the scene a bit more, try not to rush things, we can wait!

Thank you!

I appreciate you giving Lea a bit of a backbone! It drives me crazy when authors make women out to be sex crazed lunatics who are tamed instantly with sex and don't try to escape or fight back. I would love to see longer chapters, but great start so far :)

Please write more!!!

I really want to read what happens next!!!