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by ariesgirl04/13/14

I'm glad she finally stopped wallowing in self pity.

I wanted to know Brad's side of the breakup. The evidence of the messages and pics made him look guilty but I wanted to get the whole scoop.

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by racoon117404/14/14

Short but not to short, Sexy and Sweet

As a gardener it was interesting to see someone use that as a major plot line not once but twice. It's nice to see something other then Special Forces, Mustangs, Lawyers etc. Nice sex scenes especially the solo action. I'd love to see a Toys and Masturbation story from you sometime soon. Thanks for the read.

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by LeFrog0804/15/14

Nicely done...

Very romantic with interesting characters but I was distracted by the meals menus:
I'm not vegan and every "veggie" meal description had me salivating for a rare steak. And pizza without pepperoni or bacon? No, thanks.

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by Anonymous04/15/14

dream

a old mans dream story. good dream for him.

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by bgmisfun04/15/14

Pretty Damn Good

Very believable and likable characters. And hot sex scenes too.

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by chytown04/15/14

Great Piece Of Writing*****

Very entertaining and very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing a great read.

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by magic10fingers404/23/14

Such a great flow to the story

Pure enjoyment with no rush - and the narration was so well done! Yea for older men and younger women!
I hope you write more! Five does not do it justice!

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