"Oops, Sorry," Dean Flashes Wife #4

Talk about secrets, this story has them all coming out! Super entry, hot dialogue !

While, I've already determined that Dean is a real perv, the other boys, especially now Bob and his pantie fetish is coming in a strong second! Kim herself is thoroughly enjoying the tension and torture she is putting Dean's friends through. I especially like Michael's casual, don't give a damn attitude and it will surprise us all what our fabulous SJP has instore for his sexual desire or fetish. Also entered in to the story is a Mustang GT, this time orange, but as hot as Kim is herself. I almost wish I could get one for myself with a Kim included :) Love the speed and suspense of the way this all is being presented and how it ends up is anyone's guess. Won't surprise me a bit if some more characters come in to the storyline! Another 5 star effort and yes, I liked it and the text made me happy! :) :) Smiling Jaybird says THANKS Susan! :) :)

love your stuff

love your kinky mind Susanjillparker, you are a great story teller, or maybe a great truthteller!!

Loved reading the story!

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Although I thought this story had an excess of expose' (pun?) in the beginning, as it described the struggle between Dean and Kim in getting her to be an exhibitionist - too much telling instead of showing - it heated up very nicely by the end. I liked the way she busted the guys spying on her, then brought them inside to continue the adventure. Was it intended to end abruptly as it did, or is there more coming? I scrolled through your story list, hoping to find a continuation, but had no luck.

wow realy?

This story was so filled with repeat sentences which made it longer than it needs to be, you take so long to get to the point and then well hello to be continued IS NOT an ending. the other stories that I have read were pretty good and compared to this one they were above average. When do we get to read the the story that actually gets to the point of this story. the subject matter of the story here was a great idea however it's pretty much worthless if it doesn't happen and if you cant actually finish the story then don't write a story till you have some sort of an ending. I would have really liked this story if you explained how the three enjoyed her body and if she did in fact divorce Dean to hook up with Michael. Come on.

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You won't believe me, but I am so pulling for you as a writer of erotic fiction. And this is a small thing, but it bothered me...panties is always plural when used as a standalone noun. Panty is only used to a descriptive adjective, such as pantyhose, panty-girdle or panty waist...but whenever you are talking about female underwear, the correct word is "panties". If you intend to continue to write erotic fiction, this word will come up all too often. I thought you should know this. Women will notice this mistake more than men will.

Again a lot of words.