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The Contrast Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/17/14

editor please

please get an editor. please also tell me that i'm not the only one to notice this.

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by Ms_SassyFlurt04/18/14

good story, bad grammer

I like this story, but really does need an editor.

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by DthJezter04/25/14

These stories do have some merit and are rather enjoyable once you have a chance to rework each sentence. An editor would be a lovely idea to help you, the author out. So far I respect the effort you put into your stories. Good luck and Cheers!

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