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More Machine Than Man

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by Anonymous

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by todski2804/15/14

much fun had with this one

the flow and internal rhymes really push the pace, smiled reading it, I would cut a few words here and there, but I like what you did with this.

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by Epmd60704/16/14

so-so

more prose than poem...so I give it a middling mark, though I'm interested in your writing.

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by AZMotherLover07/27/14

Interesting. I've always had a slight robot fetish ever since I saw Fritz Lang's "Metropolis".

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