The plot was cheesey as fomunda's finest. The boss was a wannabe flash bastard. Syntax of story though? Twas' purst platinum . Good thing thar husband did what must be done afore yon foolish wife disgraced them both to the dust. No real chiding from me to right homeable' author. Why uts as if Thomas Hardy took time by forelock and gave im' droll humor to burn, aye .
One thing to Denham afore Ah go. Don't ee dare go way so long agaun. Ye been missed. *****
Mess with one, you've 15 to deal with plus all the rest of the lads and lassies at the club. My husband and all the men in our family including our kids play :)
Saw it live at a Garth Brooks concert once with the... alternate last verse.
"Well, I guess I was wrong, I just don't belong
But hell, I've been there before.
Everything's alright, I'll just say goodnight and I'll show myself to the door.
I didn't mean to cause a big scene, just wait 'til I finish this glass.
Then sweet little lady I'll head back to the bar...
AND YOU CAN KISS MY ASSSSSSSSS!!!!!"
Great tale, and having played Rugby, I can appreciate it. Yes, even us "Yanks" have Rugby here. lol
I couldn't help but laugh out loud. So matter of fact...so literary...so droll.
Glad I found this author awhile back...your stories are excellent, something to look forward to, unfortunately just too infrequently. Thank you.
I still prefer Lacrosse for good ol'fashion 'Come To Jesus' brutal melees. Though to be honest, watching the girls play does make me cringe. They're bloody vicious!
I loved the tale and just in case anyone cares to know life imitates art or is it art imitates life??? Anyway my best bud was the offended husband and my entire company and I were the friends in low places. And that was funny as hell too..
English
Excellent
A loving husband saves his loving wife from a predator and breaks the asshole's jaw at the same time. Nice.
Five Stars
Welcome back
Welcome back to one of the true old school loving lives writers and he is still as good as when he last produced a story
Glad your back
Welcome back! Always enjoy to read any submission that you post. Keep setting the high standards.
Aye.The play's the thing.
The plot was cheesey as fomunda's finest. The boss was a wannabe flash bastard. Syntax of story though? Twas' purst platinum . Good thing thar husband did what must be done afore yon foolish wife disgraced them both to the dust. No real chiding from me to right homeable' author. Why uts as if Thomas Hardy took time by forelock and gave im' droll humor to burn, aye .
One thing to Denham afore Ah go. Don't ee dare go way so long agaun. Ye been missed. *****
FRIENDS, TEAMMATES AND LOYALTY
with all those traits you never will be a loser, TK U MLJ LV NV
GOOD TO SEE YOU BACK IN GOOD FORM
TK U MLJ LV NV
Never ever mess with a rugby team
Mess with one, you've 15 to deal with plus all the rest of the lads and lassies at the club. My husband and all the men in our family including our kids play :)
5 stars!
Enjoyed it
A fun read. Five stars.
Loved the song!
Saw it live at a Garth Brooks concert once with the... alternate last verse.
"Well, I guess I was wrong, I just don't belong
But hell, I've been there before.
Everything's alright, I'll just say goodnight and I'll show myself to the door.
I didn't mean to cause a big scene, just wait 'til I finish this glass.
Then sweet little lady I'll head back to the bar...
AND YOU CAN KISS MY ASSSSSSSSS!!!!!"
Great tale, and having played Rugby, I can appreciate it. Yes, even us "Yanks" have Rugby here. lol
5 Stars!
A real loving wife
She supported her husband as soon as she found out what was going on. No questions, no doubt! Refreshing.
Also a very humorous interplay with the police.
And the good guys win!
Excellent
Another excellent story. Thanks a lot!
LOL
I couldn't help but laugh out loud. So matter of fact...so literary...so droll.
Glad I found this author awhile back...your stories are excellent, something to look forward to, unfortunately just too infrequently. Thank you.
Ah the rugby club
Last match of the season for my local club this Sunday. Better book the taxi straight away!
Loved Rereading This.
It is real nice to see Denham Forrest posting again. The lady did not notice what was going on but gave a well-punctuated statement of position...
Can't top The Wanderer!
Five Stars Old Friend!
Great little flash story
Five stars and a big smile for this one.
Bravo!
Very entertaining and a lot of fun to read. Thanks for the read and please keep it coming, my wife and I enjoyed it.
5* Of course!
D_F never gives us anything less.
What's not to like
Never mess with rugby players, the willingly break their own bones in play!
Good story as always.
Chilley
Well Done
Very nice little tale. I always prefer stories that leave me in better mood after I reach The End.
nice and concise
'Wandered'when you would be back again. Nice twist planting suspicion that wife was a willing party.
Welcome Back
Sorry, I could only give it a 5 but then they won't let us vote higher. Refreshing to read something good again.
Thanks We Needed This****
Just a fun filled story. Thanks for sharing.
pretty good
The would be rapist needed more punishment.
Passed out drunk is unable to give consent.
Still great the second time around!
Yeah, I had to read this one again. LOL
I'll be damned
A story were the cops are'nt complete assholes
ehh, Rugbby's okay
I still prefer Lacrosse for good ol'fashion 'Come To Jesus' brutal melees. Though to be honest, watching the girls play does make me cringe. They're bloody vicious!
Yep - civilization does still exist
In little corner places with essentially decent people who do the right things - because they are right.
A lot of fun was had by most -
LOL thank you
LOL
I loved the tale and just in case anyone cares to know life imitates art or is it art imitates life??? Anyway my best bud was the offended husband and my entire company and I were the friends in low places. And that was funny as hell too..
RUGBY IS A PHYSICAL GAME
played and enjoyed by rugged individuals. TK U MLJ LV NV
Weird Game
Played it and never figured out the rules. Broke an ankle and then I didn't have to worry about the rules.
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