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some say as you get older
you get wiser, for you and from my point of view on your story all you did was become an idiot.
Coralling yourself as a
Indian WACC writer,what could be more demeaning.
I kind of liked it
I thought it was playfully written and fun. I liked it. Not sure why all the anonymous dislikes.
Your Shift of Attitude
from expressing the wife's desire for exhibitionism to a "swinging" life style is a worldclass leap to throw aside whatever vows you made to one another at your marriage.
Sweet and Sexy!
Loved your story! It is sweet and sexy all at the same time. While your grammar and syntax aren't technically perfect, allowing your own speech patterns to influence your writing has a nice effect on the story as a whole. It really helped me to conjure images of the scenes, imagining the two of you interacting. Nicely done!
Very good but it was too short.
Therefore, I only rated it 4 stars.
Drivle
I overrated this posting with a 2 Star. It should be written in this person's native language or after he becomes 14 yrs. old.
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