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it got worse
Scat
You lost me once you started with the coprophilia, mind you, the grammar & spelling are shit too. Is it possible to give a negative number of stars.
Nasty
way to kill a story
you started well in chapter one, a little fast, but overall a nice fast read, then in chapter two you just killed the entire buzz you started, stop now ... again, where are the negative star votes?
impove
It is a good story but need improvement
ignore the others
dont mind them, they just dont have a taste fro the really kinky side, keep up your work and it will pay off
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