Spring Break Wife

INCREDIBLE

I could not tear myself away from the computer. This is HOT

When I was 18 I wanted to fuck my mother in the worst way.

My mother wore HEAVY PINK LIPSTICK, Each time I saw her I ran to my room and jerked off...........

Please finish the story when the baby is born...............

Interesting

It has all the formula items that the hardcore will love. Lots of sex, lots of teasing, jealousy and reluctance. And mom ends up pregnant. Just not a lot of romance from my perspective. oh well.

Math?

If mom was 16 and dad was 20 when she was pregnant, how is she now 34 and dad is 40?

a very sweet love story

I'm glad that Gary finally got a set of balls and started taking control of his mom and kept her away from other guys.

I think he had rights to be jealous of his mom and dad talking together without him being there since he was her husband now and the father of her baby.

He needed the feeling of being in control of her, and perhaps he should have given her a spanking for doing anything before clearing it with him first since he is the father of her baby.

I think she needs to have more than just one baby by Gary just to keep her busy with taking care of his children and not flirt.

The old saying of keeping her pregnant and barefoot will keep her home, and that is just what he needs to do .

Thanks for the read.

The American obsession - getting your mom pregnant.

Why do writers of great stories like this one have to fuck them up by getting the mother pregnant, thus creating a very difficult future for themselves. I thought incest was for fun. Mom and my sister love our two or threesomes but none of us want to stuff it all up by having babies. (I'm not American)

Hot story, and I genuinely enjoyed it. The hotel room scenes in particular were very cute. Overall, a nicely done piece.

For the love of all that is holy, though, never use the term 'twat' again, and if you ever refer to ejaculate as 'dick snot' again I will hunt you down and take a sledgehammer to your keyboard. In an otherwise reasonably well-written story, those two gaffes stuck out like poisoned eye-harpoons.

Great fucking story!! Good writing, spelling, grammar and punctuation! The length was just right, too. Not too short nor too long. I hope this writer will continue to write as he seems to have a real gift for writing porn.

Great read

Not over the top stupid, Good plot and well written.

great story, kept my pussy wetter then ever!!

Cant wait to fuck now

Nice!

Hope it continues! Great story.

Long and worth the read!

That might have been the hottest story on here. I usually don't read the whole thing when they are this long, but that was hot!

great story

This is really a great story. Good buildup and nice plot. Keep up writing in same way. Looking forward to see ur new stories again in same category.

Very hot

Absolutely loved it... look forward to more between these two. Hope she gets pregnant again... and again... and again ;)

I held her hips to slowly impale her on my bare cock. I wanted to plant a baby in Mom's belly. That was the way to win her. First Dad, and now me.

That's 18 year old Gary, a big strong boy and wise beyond his years. At first on their vacation, they joked that he was his mother Amy's "second husband." They messed around, mom sucked him off and he feasted on the paradise between his mother's legs. But Amy has much, much more in store for her darling baby boy. She introduces Gary's fat 8-incher to the same cunt he came out of, and it's off to the races. He fucks his mother boy does he fuck her, he fucks her every which way but loose. Amy joyfully discovers that her son is a non-stop semen producing machine, he can fuck her multiple times a day and night, his hot young balls never quit, he's always filling her to the brim with his creamy semen. Now he really is her second husband, doing what husbands do to their brides. Still, it occasionally rankles that his father at one time made use of his mother's beautiful perfect twat and he has to demonstrate anew that it belongs to him and his big cock alone. "My jealousy of Mom and Dad got the better of me, so I rolled Mom over and helped her up on her hands and knees. I got behind her and stuffed her full of my cock. 'Uff!' she grunted." Finally, he achieves what so many boys can only whack off dreaming about. Gary fucks a baby up where he was once a baby. Now he's no ordinary motherfucker, he's a motherfucker bursting with manly pride. He is truly the proud young cock-carrier and balls-bearer in his mother's life. I love that this brilliant story has a happy ending. Gary and his mom will stay together always, living openly in a new city as man and wife, and Gary'll be fucking babies up his mother's cunt for years to come. That boy sure has the balls to do it.

cumming!!!!!

Hard to read while fingering my wet pussy this story really got me going keep it up

Good but needs an editor

Good but needs more editing.

I concur

"great story
This is really a great story. Good buildup and nice plot. Keep up writing in same way. Looking forward to see ur new stories again in same category."

Just to make it a little better

Would have been hot if the other guy had felt up or even sex with his mom while his mom saw him with the friend of hers.

Great story!

I usually lurk around in the Loving Wives section, but this one fits as well. I've read a few mother son incest stories over the years but I think this is the best. Turns me on more than father/daughter, but I'm a guy, and FROM Tennessee. I agreed with the Anon commenter about the age math 16/20 and 34/40 isn't right. I can imagine a 34 year old hottie with good genes passing for a 22 year old. It was a good plot, with the beach spring break thing. And the "ditzy blonde" thread through the story was certainly blown, first in the art museum, when she knew her stuff, and then in the end when she reveals she had planned to get pregnant by her son all along! I agree with the other commenter who spoke of the guy coming on to her in the club. It would have been real hot if she had let him get his hand under her dress and in her pussy and finger fuck her in the dark corner. That would have really turned the son on, if just having his hand on her ass did. I couldn't stop reading it. Made me stiff. Please, you might add another part to this one after the baby is born, and she lets men flirt with her and the son watches. Good plot.
5 stars. Looking forward to reading your other submissions.

Fantastic!

I really liked this sweet love story between a young mother and her son. The premise is creative and original and the execution is as close to perfect as one can expect.

I liked the psychological game Amy played with Gary, teasing him and flirting with other men to make him jealous. Even though she wants him as her lover, she's still his mother and she's teaching him how to act like a man and defend her honor.

And defend her honor he does, becoming her Knight in Shining Armor.

I particularly like the scene where she tests his love by asking him to wear a condom and he refuses, proving his willingness not only to be her lover, but to be her mate and father to her children.

5 stars for a very satisfying and erotic love story.

I was particularly taken with line, “I hosed dick snot all over my mom's taut abs and jiggling tits.” That's classic.

Well Written

Good erotic story the characters transition into lovers felt plausible given the situation, but the mom getting pregnant and the outcome seemed to jump the shark.

VERY NICE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story was well worth the read, it was well written and it read really easy. Your style is just what we need. THANK YOU

Was good.. until the end....

story was great.. until the end.. got way unrealistic... she wanted a child by her son...??

5 stars

Well written, easy going style. Lots of fun. I often worried about the idea of naming a model who looks like a character - I always guess that the reader doesn't want to go look something up in the middle of a story. But I'm glad you did. It gave an excellent - titillating image to work with.

Like some others I'm not crazy about the pregnancy part, but there's no denying that there is an outspoken group reading here that likes that, so I can't deduct points for that.

I'd like to add that - contrary to one commentator's assertions - this is not an American obsession. I'm an American, and have no such obsession, and I've gotten requests for my characters to get pregnant from readers who are clearly not Americans.

Great job MajorRewrite!

O.F.

Very fun!

Loved your story. A very fun read and wonderful story-line. The characters were very believable, particularly when he insisted that he had to eat and rest. I'd love to be able to discuss the specifics of the story, but will restrain myself in consideration for others. Suffice to say, very well done.

Fucking hot!!

I loved it! It was a hell of a good story

Damn Nasty but sounds so Real

It wasn't my intention to get to this website . I was just curious what my son does on computer and history search le me here .To be honest i was mad and furious at him for reading such stuff but when i started reading your story boy it sounds so real . Honestly i would believe if you tell me it's someone's real life story .I dint confront him about it but damn this story did have positive affects on me or in other words i loved this story so much that decided to drop a note .
In short you're very talented writer .
Eryn .

Amazing story

I thought the story flowed very well. Nothing was rushed and that's what makes stories worth reading to me. Keep writing you have talent.

Great

This is the kind of story that gets men going. Expand your next story into the birth and then the milky sex. That's a good turn on as well. Great writing, great dialogue.

once again

A weak minded male protagonist, easily cajoled and threatened into thinking the way that suits someone's plans. Fucking boring and plastic.

Great!

This had to rank up in the Top 5 of the stories I have read on this site and others. I like how the story was broke out by "days" which made it more believable. Please continue with this story, because you did bless them with a "daughter"!

I must be reading a different story

I see something about 30-year-old women get fat and the 30 year old mom has an 18 year old son? How?

I loved your story

And now something to WriterJab: First she is 34 and not fat because she lost he weight due to workouts with her son. Secondly the story mentions in more than three spots that she got pregnant at the tender age of 16 so you do the math.

Like I said I thought you story was very hot and enjoyed every second of it even though I kinda knew where it was heading.

Evil Incest 2

There's a space between the "impregnoriu m": get rid of that and the link should work.

Evil Incest

Dude, I loved your story so much, you're the first person I ever commented on. You have amazing writing skills for the erotic. Forgive me if I'm being out of line, but have you ever thought about writing a story involving an evil controlling salacious vixen of a mother? One that really drives the idea of a Jocasta complex home. I've seen a few around here, the best one being "Quickies: Mama's Boy"; It's a shorter story about a guy who's going off to college to be with his fiance and his mom doesn't want him to leave home and marry so she uses her body to convince him to stay home. For some reason at the moment you can't read it on Literotica, so here is an alternative link: http://www.asstr.org/files/Collections/impregnoriu m/www/stories/archive/mamasboy.htm. Personally speaking, if you made a story inspired by something like this you would have the hottest incest story on Literotica in my opinion. Definitely if you made it lengthy like "Spring Break Wife". Just wanted to speak my peace. Keep doing what you're doing, I hope to see more from you.

math doesn't add up

Sorry, but I'm a bit of a technical person. The original 'pregnant at 16', now at 34 with an 18 yr old son kinda works, but the husband's age has me a bit baffled. He was 20 when he knocked her up, so a 4 year difference. Now when she is 34, he is 40. By my math, that's a 6 yr difference.

best ive read in a while

loved your story loved how mom only had eyes for sonny you couldve easily made her into a slut with everybody humping in the same room but you kept it between the two of them i like that it makes it so much hotter keep up the awesome writing cant wait for more

Enjoyed your story

I enjoyed the story much. The pacing was good and the use of the other couple as the deus ex machina to get mother and son together was effective. I'd like to see more of your work and maybe something where the seduction process is a bit more difficult.

Great first post!

You must have been practicing before you wrote this piece. Either that or you're a stone natural writing talent. Very hot. Very smoothly written. Sweet, romantic, horny, perverse--the whole package.

I hope you'll be posting a lot more stories here.

Loved it - 5 stars!

Terrific read - well paced, whilst simultaneously romantic and perverted. I think I've only read one other story on here recently that I didn't want to end - you should definitely consider writing another part, though get ages right! (That error did not subtract from its believability though).

Bravo!

Just Awesome

What a ride, I loved it from beginning to ending.

Loved it

i loved it )

great story. thank you.

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I stopped reading at "I hosed dick snot on her".

Hated it.

I used to enjoy this type of story, but this one turned me off all together. What a selfish, needy, conniving cunt of a woman.

AWESOME

Sounds like the husband knocked up Amy for her inheritance, when she was a flat A cup and after 18 years of marriage was neglecting her. Yeah, I'd say that is enough for a divorce. Good writing. Kim in Kansas

more more more

Sequel

Loved your twist in the last three paragraphs. It added a whole new level of hotness. Makes me wonder if Jessica was a part of the plan to get them intimate by insisting that they be less bashful. I would love to see a sequel told by Mom letting us know the secrets behind her seduction.

Really Nice

This story is just plain fun to read!
George in Omaha

Fan-Fucking-Tastic!!!

This story REALLY got my cock throbbing and harder than steel. Just the way the 2 ended up so in love and together in the end. Great writing and story telling all the way around. It'd be nice to have a second part, at least I think so. Continue the great work and story telling. Thank you for such an erotic story.