Spring Break Wife

Good story

I loved this story, I hope that it is not your only one. Keep up the effort.

Dreck.

Bad plot. Illogical, stupid actions by characters.

yeah!!

I screwed my mom too when I was 23 years old she was 46 years old. OMG she was awesome.. I fucked her 6 times that night we were both drunk. no kissing and no words just straight out fucking..

Great story

I liked the different plot and the progression of their relationship throughout the week. Please write more!

Wow, really piss poor writing.

Forget about you sub-par intellect, you can't write a lick.

spring break wife

Im got lost.. Did mom go on spring break from school? Did she have an art degree. Why did she not finish school if she started? Sorry just saw a story flaw...

good storie

Thanks i enjoyed your story. Don't worry about the fucking English professors on here who are alway negative. Thought this site was about erotic stories.... Not English class... Hope you write more.

Loved it , fantastic imagination. loved the ending. "careful planning"

lol amazing ending , that one statement " careful planning "

and the reader is left in shock, that the naughty mom, had planned the whole thing.
fell for her own son while working out on the treadmill/weights/yoga at home.
set up the whole spring break room share to carefully seduce him.
Exquisite.

xxxhugsxxx.

p.s
agree with the previous comment ,
iggy the Haters&Flamers,
you wrote alot of emotion into this story & well developed plot / protagonists
with this genre & lovingwives .. that always sets them off. lol.
VOTED 5 STARS

Outstanding!!!

Absolutely love Mommy Son incest stories. Especially when Mom gets pregnant! Well written. I really enjoyed the way you led into Mom and Son having sex the first time!

OK, some inaccuracies, but whatever...

...this is the first story on this site that has affected me positively so much that I have been prepared to register.

Well done. I enjoyed the story immensely.

Keep it up, as they say ;)

"Spring Break Wife: - Amy and Gary Moore - (Thirty-four Year Old Mother and Eighteen Year Old Son).

Over the past several years that I have been reading on Literotica I have found many top-notch, top shelf incest stories of the highest calibre!! This story is no exception...except for the fact that it is well within my all-time favorite TOP FIVE (5) stories!!

The reason I'm so enthralled with this story is that mother Amy has dedicated her life, body and soul so deeply to her son Gary that she's elected to find her husband an acceptable "singles something" for him to have (and marry) after she divorces him (Gary's father)!! It is stories such as this, mother and son incestual pairing and partnering as life mates, 'husband and wife', parenting of child(ren), and the world be damned, that I can spend days on end of non-stop reading!!!!!.

'MajorRewrite'.....give us more, More, MORE, M-O-R-E, of this calibre story!! Our, at least, my accolades and appreciation will be honorable, truthful and never-ending!!!

ABOVE EXCELLENT

Absolutely superb.

Incest.........

In all my years, I've never come across an incest story that I liked as much as I do this one.... I like to read all types of incest stories but Mother/Son is my favorite. I've never had the opportunity to participate in any type of incest but that's not to say that I didn't want to....

I will see if you have any more online now and I'll definitely keep my eyes open looking for more from you.

You've done a masterful job with this story.....

brilliant story, very well written. one of the best ever on here. hope you write more like it

Amazing

I don't think I need to say much more. One of the best incest stories I've read so far. Definitely in my top 3.

Will you be writing more stories??

Amazing

Holy crap this was an amazing story! Definitely one of the best I have ever read. Thank you for writing it. It was definitely one of the more believable stories I have read in a while.

Awesome

i loved it. One of the best I read. So romantic and hot at the same time. Hope to see more like it.

AMY TRICKED GARY

AMY HAD FALLEN IN LOVE WITH HER SON AND KINDA TRICKED HIM INTO GOING ON SPRING BREAK AND KNOCKING HER UP. I DONT THINK HE MINDED BECAUSE IT WENT FROM MOTHER LOVE TO BEAUTIFUL WOMAN THAT HE LOVED. 5 STARS PLUS IN MY ROMANCE A FAVORITES. I FEEL THAT IS MORE OF A LOVE STORY.

RON TEXAS

exceptional

Truly an exceptional erotic story. It was a good closing where she confesses she's really not a ditz, but had incorporated careful planning in what appeared to be a bad accident. Good scenes, good plot.

Keep writing!

Excellent story line and loved the story overall!

raises the bar

This is so much better than the usual stories where they from out of nowhere look at each other then tear off their clothes and start having sex.
So many of these have all the plot writing of a third rate porno.

Wonderfull Story

Hope you do more stories. A 36 year old mom would drive an 18 or 20 year old crazy, especially with a body like Amy's. Hope to see more.

Leather dick?

I could not help but like the mother if, for no other reason, she was able to live in her own fantasy world. However, I wondered if she ever progressed beyond that knocked-up 16-year old.
Probably the only real question that came to mind was did her son have a leather dick? No 18-year old can cum as often as that kid is portrayed as having cum. He had a perpetual hard on and when he was not screwing his mother, she was giving him oral sex. I liked the story, but all the screwing wore me out just reading it. Let's be a little more factual shall we?

REALLY GOOD STORY

ONE OF THE BEST THAT I HAVE HAVE READ IN THE INCEST/TABOO TYPE STORY. AMY FELL IN LOVE WITH HER SON GARY AND NOW THERE ARE 3 OF THEM.

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

atlast

I loved this story!!!! Even tho its incest it really seemed that this could hav happened. Not like those other stupid plots that just go striaght for the kill with very lil build up. Thanks for your great imagination. I wished u would hav gone just a tad after her pregnancy to see Wat happened NXT...lol. thanks again.

It was okay

Started off hot then went downhill because you got caught in that classic storytelling mistake where you stop telling details and get lazy. "We had sex and she came twice" is how it all went after the first few pages. Boring.

Very Good

Good character development. Good story plot. Good loving Sex between a mother and her son. Would love to see more stories of this quality.

Very good

This has to one of the best stories on this site . I hope we see more from you .

GREAT STORY

A REALLY GREAT STORY. HE JUST THOUGHT SHE IS AN AIR HEAD. SHE GREW TO LOVE HER SON MORE THAN HER HUSBAND. AMY HAD IT ALL PLANNED OUT AND THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH.
I AM WAITING ON THE SEQUEL.
YOU WRITERS ALL SAY THAT YOUAPPRICATE THE VOTING AND COMMENTS BUT SOME OF YOU NEVER ANSWER THE FEEDBACK.

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Great story

Very hot story, love your writing. I would have changed it to step mom instead, but still loved it. I hope you keep giving us more stories, love your style and sexy story.

GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations again for this amazing, excellent, fantastic, hot and super-well written story!!!!

Excellent

A five pointer.

great

it rated 5 stars

Great story . I hope that we see more stories from you . With out a doubt 5 stars

That was absolutely fucking awesome! I don't know what I like better, the flawless story or seeing your moniker when I got to the end, thinking how great the story was! Hehehe :)

....five of five, easily! ....and let me tell you,mas a rule, I HATE mother/son stories, they usually just flat turn me off! The characters were really well written, and while the son was resistant he wasn't written as a whiny pussy ass like almost every fucking brother/son/father is in almost all of these stories, which is usually unbelievable. Bravo on a job well done! ...now I'm off to see what else you've written! ...otherwise its a search through at least another thirty before I find anything palatable ;)

Keep writing

Give more like that.

10/10

One of the first stories i read when i discovered literotica, and to this day i still read it at least once a month! hope to read more from you soon

Just delete any negative or too piquant comments you don't like. Noone will know.

Except you and me; you fucking coward. You know who you are, and what you did. You deserve the regret. May you get stronger, and smarter, and braver. But probably not.

Oh Look ASSHOLE ANNONY is calling someone a coward

and he won't even leave his name , so the writer can reply back to him. Guess he is just a big nouth asshole who hides behind the annnony! I Gave it a 5 asshole. Bonnie

great story

In my favorites not just incest but a love story


Ron Texas

Puss versus pussy

It seems that almost no one under 50 knows that a puss is a face. It is not a short for pussy. They are completely different words with completely different meanings. Remember that when someone uses the words "sour puss" they're referring to a sad face, not a smelly vagina.
Now that I got that out, I thought the story was very erotic although rushed at the conclusion.

FAVORITES

A really good story it is in my favorites and I have read it many times and plan on reading it many more. More of a true love story than incest. I think there could have been more to the ending but I did not write it. I liked the part where Amy said she wanted to make love not fuck.

Ron Texas

Just like any insecure wimpass, it all came to an abrupt end. Aiiii

more

more chapters

tbh

I wish the two couples ended up in a four way. The story got to weird when the two wanted to have a baby.

I anticipate your deletion of this comment, but I'm writing it, regardless.

I might've enjoyed this story, despite the central thread of adultery... Alas, I could not enjoy it, because of the mother's blatant and deliberate humiliation of her son. If my new wife did something like that on OUR honeymoon? I'd leave her to her fun and file divorce papers the next day. It's not my job to ensure some douche doesn't take her out on the dance floor and fuck her right there, just as it isn't her job to ensure that I don't do the same thing with another woman. It's her job to emanate "I'm taken" with her body language, and my job to do the same. I'm there to protect her, of course, but that doesn't include watching her like a hawk to ensure she doesn't flirt her way into shredding our vows. The mother in this story said she wasn't "the ditzy blonde you think I am." Her actions belie the truth of her words. Overall, I was not personally impressed by the caliber of the storytelling. I regret to report, I could only give two stars. I'm anonymous because cleansing my inbox of the explosion of vitriolic emails I would receive should I use my pseudonym instead...did not sound like an appealing activity to me ;)

Disappointing

The premise of the story was good and I really liked Gary. I did not like Mom/Amy. I abhor women who pout when they don't get their way and expect their spouse to never say no to them. I just can't like a story with the kind of character I wouldn't put up with and who I would never have as a friend.

in my favorites

Read it many times and it just gets better.

Ron

cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Amy's Game

Really enjoyed the story, particularly the characterization of Amy as a mature woman who knew just what she wanted, and how to get it -- first, the perfect big tit body that would get her all the fucking she wanted from her son, and finally get her knocked up by her big-cock son and free of her first husband. The play-offs between Amy and her son, and Brad and Jess, were really nice facilitators. It might have been nice for Amy's boy to get into Jesse while in fort Lauderdale, but I suppose that would have ruined the completion of Amy's dogged pursuit of her son. Thanx for the read!