Good start- story has lots of potential- please continue.
Deserves more attention but the audience (for cfnm) is limited and not very expressive! Well written, well edited except for one word... shunned? Who wouldn't want to meet Violet? Thanks for an inspirational read.
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Good start - please continue
Good start- story has lots of potential- please continue.
Very nicely done!
Deserves more attention but the audience (for cfnm) is limited and not very expressive! Well written, well edited except for one word... shunned? Who wouldn't want to meet Violet? Thanks for an inspirational read.
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