Room with a View

Hot!!

Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Lovely first story

I'll be looking for more!

First time?

It's hard to believe this is the first story you've written. Maybe the first erotic one?
With economy of words, especially 'dirty' ones, you lead your readers to enter your story with their own imagination, filling in the details to suit themselves.
The mind is truly the most powerful sex organ in our bodies and harnessing it is the most difficult task for a writer!
I hope you'll write more, and often.
Good luck.

Great!

Very, very good erotic storytelling. Give us more.

Very well written. Very erotic. Look forward to more.

Very erotic story with a nice flow.

I imagine we will see more from Hint! Eagerly awaiting another installment!

Pretty damn good

Nothing amateurish about this

Great style

It has great style and free flow , of course it is erotic

A passionately rendered erotic story. You convey the raw sex yet keep a tight rein on the action as it progresses. Nice work.

A Mama with talent

Yours is a wonderfully told, intimately passionate story, especially for a first effort. I rated it a five, only because there were no numbers above five available to me. Thank you for sharing a glimpse into a wonderfully sexual and sensual mind.

Hot!

You painted a great picture! I am looking forward to more hotness!

Well crafted

Thanks for posting. I hope you have more time on your hands to write and give us more hints.

outstanding

Well done.

Awesome

I love the story, but other than there being an obvious lack of backstory as well as the description really not making sense. It is the best story I have read since I joined literotica a month ago. Will this be a series?

steamy!

Well written and HOT! Post more!