Double Dare Pt. 02

Good but short.

Very promising

This is slightly too brief, in my view. I'm enjoying the girls' adventures and there's a promising mix of characters with a resulting wide range of potential scenarios. Please keep going.

So -so

Wildly unrealistic, stereotypical story. Sadly lacking in character development and emotional depth.

If nothing else the author should learn the difference between "waste" and "waist" before posting the next instalment.

Good story

I liked the way the story built as it went on. In my opinion, you should have combined the first two stories into one story. I am anxious to read the next chapter of the story. Keep up the good work.

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