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An extremely implausible story!!!
First of all, if the girl went to a rape center, the police, or a hospital--the DNA sample of her assailants attack would be easily detected. One hundred dollars is hardly enough to justify a seasoned pro doing the job, much less an unsuspecting baby-sitter who is a teenager.
And what about Mom, she was supposed to be home by now. The whole story is lacking in so many ways, that I'm surprised the author would dare go public with it, making the author sound like a total fool.
I like good stories, this one is definitely on my NOT list.
Ignore other commenter
Great story! Just because there is DNA from one of the men doesn't mean it was rape! Just means intercourse occurred. As for when the mom returns, again, no guarantee of when she was returning, women like to talk, so she probably ran late as women are wont to do! Just because you don't like it, does NOT make it a bad story. Ashson is an Awesome author!!!
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If she reported it, they would all be arrested and charged with rape or subornation of rape. They would be separated and questioned a terrifying experience. And, to get a conviction, the charges would be dropped against the person that agreed to testify which their attorneys would advise each of them to do. And, rather than spend $50,000 and up on a defense attorney and possible prison, they would all be wanting to take that deal.
Ignore the haters
To the recent commenters: you want plausibility? Let me tell you of a story of a girl who reported her rape and her rapist got off scot free because, despite overwhelming physical evidence and DNA samples, the defense attorney was able to successfully argue that she'd been sleeping around at her school. The jury had bought it. So think about some real world scenarios before you get on here and trash a story because of "plausibility". You want something more plausible and realistic? Go peruse the news or court cases or something.
Ash, I think this is one of your better stories. Keep it up!
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