Now I want to get to the story! The backstory is intriguing, as is the amoral/moral duality of the lead. The equation of light skin with attractiveness (3 out of 3 characters in this one-pager) is disconcerting, however, especially for the rare and exciting setting (on Literotica) of Africa and the Middle East. But I'd definitely like to read more!
Peopke stop encouraging this person. The writing sucks. That is that. You claim to like it and such but this is utter garbage. Dammit what will it take to get this author banned.
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great set-up
Now I want to get to the story! The backstory is intriguing, as is the amoral/moral duality of the lead. The equation of light skin with attractiveness (3 out of 3 characters in this one-pager) is disconcerting, however, especially for the rare and exciting setting (on Literotica) of Africa and the Middle East. But I'd definitely like to read more!
nice
I like it
OMFG
Peopke stop encouraging this person. The writing sucks. That is that. You claim to like it and such but this is utter garbage. Dammit what will it take to get this author banned.
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