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Nice first submission, if a bit short
I liked how the female character seemed vulnerable but still confident.
A passion well expressed
I enjoyed the sexpression of your fantasy! It is always a positive for a man to be able to clearly glimpse the inner workings of a female mind. You told your fantasy clearly and without a hitch. It is no accident that I gave this effort a five. I found it very stimulating and very eye-opening. Thank you for not forgetting to minister to his balls...........just a small glimpse into the fantasy mind of a married male.....Nice work and please share more of you....
You should write more
I felt pulled along by your writing. It kept me involved. I hope you will write more. Explore your feelings and fantasies. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for the feedback!
I appreciate the feedback on my first submission. Thanks for overlooking the typos---looks like I'll need to proofread my next story a little better. ;)
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