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by Anonymous

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by demure10104/20/14

Grins

Nice!

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by todski2804/20/14

your imagination

and originality always makes for good reading

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by Oldbear6304/20/14

Loved it!

I have had a poem rattling around between my ears about this cold wet spring to far, but you nailed it - beautifully!

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by tazz31704/21/14

THE PUPPET MASTER CONTROLS

just whom is HE. TK U MLJ LV NV

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