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by Anonymous

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by demure10104/20/14

Wonderful

And painfully true

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by Oldbear6304/20/14

Very nice, very sad

Not always true if you are open, observant and willing. Just sayin'...

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by tazz31704/20/14

FALSE BELIEFS LEAD TO

non-sequitur emotions. TK U MLJ LV NV people are only as young...as old as they want to be and not what they are. RESPECTFULLY mlj

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by Cleardaynow04/21/14

Really good

A real contrast in style (though not quality) with Toccata.

I particularly like the last four lines (OK I know there are only seven). But the first three are essential as the base.

Every single word counts to build such a strong image.

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