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I started reading this when it was first published on here! Please update soon x
why should we read your story........
when it took you almost a year to update without an explanation. Some of you lit authors................
Hopefully Elle will be able to buy some time when Dennis turn her loose for his sick game.
I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to read more! Soon please??!!
It's great you're back. :)
I have been waiting so long for chapter 3, and it didn't disappoint. IT'S BRILLIANT! Now you have started writing this again, hopefully you will stick with it and the chapters should just flow more easily, so please hurry with chapter 4. :)
Thanks! :-)
Thanks for the feedback everyone! :) Please comment/vote I'm really enjoying reading it!
And to those of you who have been reading since I first posted Chapter 1 thank you for being so patient! I got stuck on chapter 3 then I got annoyed and just ignored it. But I've started Chapter 4 and I'm really excited to get it finished and posted :-)
Is this a rewrite?
The story is familiar.
Regardless, I'm enjoying it so far. If you can post regularly, you could develop a good readership. I'll keep my eye out for chapter 4.
Chapter 4
Hey everyone! Thanks for the feedback, I'm so sorry I haven't posted Ch 04 yet! Uni is crazy at the moment, but I only have 3 weeks til the semester is done woohoo! Iso I haven't had time to get it finished but I will! :-)
Good News!
It's good that chapter 4 will be with us soon. Cannot wait. :)
Good Story
I've just read chapters 1-3. Really enjoying your work just disappointed that chapters aren't longer and out faster. I look forward to the next chapter. Hope to see it soon. Keep it up. :-)
Looking forward to Ch.4.
Ch.4
I really hope Chapter 4 will be out soon
PLEASE CONTINUE
can't wait dis iz great
More, please?
This story is really good, and I cannot wait to see a satisfying resolution to their troubles. I have noticed that it is much better to read stories that are complete rather than wait for months for each update, but this story is quite promising, so I do not intend to give up on it, however, at this rate it might be wise to check back only a long time from now - please tell me that won't be the case! I understand that life gets in the way and that you do not owe your readers anything, however, you do owe it to yourself to do your best for this wonderful story and to develop self-discipline if you are serious about being a writer, because you certainly have the talent. But talent without self-discipline is often squandered... For the future, a good advice that I've seen shared many times by writers (who have high hopes but end up having huge pauses between postings and thus alienate their readers) is that the best thing to do is to write the whole story before posting it. So maybe by some miracle you can get enough motivation to sit down and finish this story. I really hope so, because this story is worth it!
waiting
Morrrreeeee this is great
getting interesting
i like how this story is going, its building rather well. keep up the good work! can't wait for chapter 4 :)
amazing
I cant wait to read the next one.
yay
A female lead that fights back instead of whining. And so far no bitchiness between females. Yeah, girl power.
Please update again soon
This is a good story and could be a great one if only you could make the chapters longer. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
An Awsome story!!
I hope to be reading the following chapters soon!!
Mane you can send a text when you summit a new chapter
please..please update ... we are dying here love to know what happens..
love it!
When's the next chapter ? I need to know what happens next!! PLEASE!!!
Amazing story !!!!!!
pretty please
Can you please update. This is a great story.
YAAAYYYYYYY........... :(
another really good story forgotten and unfinished
*rolling my eyes*
Another good story left unfinished. Please finish.
2nd time around still good.
Still on literotica??
Dying for this to continue!
Please come back and give us more! Love your story and writing style; really wish you would continue your story.
Chapter 4
Hey everyone! Thank you for the lovely comments I am really sorry I got a bit stuck and then my tablet died so I lost the file, then you know life, busy, am currently studying overseas and I completely forgot about it.
Buttttt I am working on chapter 4 literally right now, I am a lit fan first and I really don't want this story to end up like so many on here with no ending. I totally know how disappointing it is to be reading a story only to realise the author hasn't updated it for a few years! So thank you for anyone who as stuck around, am hoping that I can submit the new chapter in a few days. :)
Waiting
Did you ever finish chapter 4?
Waiting
Omg i love this story.... cant wait to see what happens next i hope its exciting
Obsessed
Im so into this story that i bookedmarked it on my phone computer and tablet just waiting for you to update it. Breathing heavily............ lol
Guess you just gave up on it.
Good enough beginning. At this rate we shall all die of old age. It's disappointing.
ok you and me share something in common
neither one of us has any real talent for writing ..You by the way suck shit for not finishing this story or even adding to it in over a year ....you were just a huge waste of my time .I hope karma pays you back .
Good job
I like it! I like Elle's spirit & I hope you can finish the story-it has a good plot, hope, & moves at a good pace
Liked it but...
I really liked the story. I wish I could read the rest of the story. It has a lot of potential but this is only just the beginning. However, since you haven't updated in nearly 2 years I won't hold my breath waiting for an update. I understand (I'm very much the same) but it's a real shame.
so excited for the next chapter
get to the good stuff!
Dum-tee-dee-dum-teedee-dum.m...and then there was a fire and they all died horrible deaths, as they were trapped in cages. I'm gonna go get drunk now.
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