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Grandson Visits Grandma Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by sc00paway04/22/14

Some errors: Her "story phrase" was supposed to be "Let me tell you..." and outside, it was HER that crossed her legs, not him that crossed his leg over hers. Oops.

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by Anonymous04/22/14

More

Great start! Can't wait for more...

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by mcbtws04/22/14

Is This Dipshit Retarded??

The fucker should have jumped her old bones by the 5th paragraph. Not too bright is he?

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by Anonymous04/22/14

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Surely Part 2 will have some kind of sex, right?

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by Ian Sinclair04/23/14

a promise that will likely be unfulfilled...

This site is littered with promising 1st part stories saying 'more to come in part 2', but part 2 never appears, Can't help feeling that this will go the same way, shame, as it's genuinely erotic reading!

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by sc00paway04/23/14

Hello readers.

Part 2 is currently pending.

Thank you for the ratings and feedback! I'd write more per part if I had more time in real life to myself. So, I appreciate the patience. :)

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by PathStrayer04/23/14

Good start. Looking forward to the rest.

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by toJohnny704/25/14

Great start but story ended too quickly.

Story needed to have more content even if it's a chapter. Published too soon, ned more to work with, now I feel the author left us high and dry.

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by sc00paway04/26/14

Part 2...

Part 2 is available here: http://www.literotica.com/s/grandson-visits-grandm a-pt-02

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by daddy195012/17/14

Great start

This has the potential to be highly erotic. Let's see if the built up anticipation is rewarded as I click on part 2.

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by Anonymous11/14/15

"Age of Satisfaction Returns"

This has to be the pause that reflects the serious Question of "Your Place or Mine". I really love this short story as it brings back many a fond memory. I have had this happen to me at times when I was too bashful to follow through. But at todays standards, Well Allis fair in Love and War.

Very nice writing . Thank You Very Much for shareing.

Bill at - rbill66@yahoo.com

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