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by Anonymous

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by chytown04/22/14

Thanks***

For writing.

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by Huedogg204/22/14

like I said, you love the story or you hate the story

This was my first in the middle story from JPB. I understand that the kids want to keep the family together, but at what cost. All he did was teach them that the can get what they want by lying. They knew for 2 years their mom was a whore but keep it secret. I had to see what type of wives they'll be. They had a hell of a role model.

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by betrayedbylove04/22/14

Damn

Oh no. No revenge. No retribution. No consequences?
No way.
You broke my heart with this one.

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by sugna04/22/14

Finish it

Huedogg2 was right, the daughters proved that they were as selfish as their mother. Good kids would have told their father, if only for his sake. Max was just fooling around a little, she was a full blown slut. Disease is a likely hood for such people and surprising that she didn't get something. In addition to exposing her husband to disease, she also exposed him to the disdain and ridicule of those she fucked. She didn't love her husband, that is a contradiction. Her actions were not loving, they were not caring, they were not even nice. So, the usual plot game of the cheating wife being great in every way other than fidelity is bullshit once again. Finish the story, you left us hanging with Frank waiting to find out what will happen when the girls to college. Does he man up and move on? Does he stay with her and accept her selfish behavior? Most men that have been married for 20 years or more develop some kind of character in that time. They also know that there is life after divorce. Why not just move on? Why live with the constant reminder of her cheating?

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by LordSlamdawgg04/22/14

JPB is in classic troll mode

Let's sum events up

1) wife is indiscriminate nympho

2)flips switch and goes to chaste mode after being caught out.

3) husband is outraged but save for giving up 'cumnilinguis' , there are no repercussions

4) the conclusion of the story is open ended

I'm not taking the bait ( not this time)

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by looking4it04/22/14

HD said it very well. Stay together for the girls? Okay, I can understand the hurt divorce does to children and the father almost always loses even when the wife is at fault. But what did this type of reaction tell the girls about relationships, fidelity and consequences for selfish behavior? Nothing...at least nothing positive.

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by fifteen1604/22/14

Think and think again

Yes that's my motto, sixteen year old girls selfish no I don't think so, look at it from their point of view they have two good and loving parents, their mother hurts their father are they suddenly going to hate their mum, of course not they will do almost anything to keep mum and dad together, we can say that a child is mature but only mature for their age they cannot possibly have the maturity of someone twice their age, think back to our adolescence. Think of an unmade road, very uneven and full of potholes, to turn around and retreat you achieve nothing to deviate right or left is worse than the road itself, so it's low gear and proceed with caution, the smooth tarmac road is long gone. Some times in life people haft to make the best of a bad job. I guess JPB's character is in his early forties, does he really want to be on his own in an apartment missing the last few years of his children growing up, finding another partner, is the mark2 version going to be any better than the first he has everything he wants at home except the feelings previously held for his wife and remember his options are still open and time to arrange the best possible exit if he so desires, think about it folks this possibly one of the best and realistic stories ever written by JPB. Remember, always think and think again. A 5 from me.

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by 1Thinkingman04/22/14

No Bob

I can understand staying with the slut because the system is stacked against men no matter what has happened. The girls are sixteen so two years and gone. Sell the house and pay for their education. Keep whatever is left and move on without the slut. But that is not what this story had happen and that makes it very distasteful. The best I can give for an outcome like this is a *** as no real man would send this kind of negative message to is daughters.

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by hansbwl04/22/14

So Say The Cuckmaster!

You must have told stories about the total USA slut population!

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by lance_spearman04/22/14

The logical thing to have done

would be to have her sign a divorce agreement structured the way he wants, (house, custody, no alimony, etc,) when she says she wants to work on the marriage after the confrontation.

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by zed004/22/14

Nice Try Bob!

This was a well written valiant attempt to make your wimpy assed cuckold cartoon character story somehow palatable to any of your readers with a set of balls.
Speaking of balls, when are you going to grow a pair yourself?
It's been scientifically proven that a steady diet of other men's cream pie will cause your balls to shrivel, and eventually fall off.
But before that happens the poor little pussy boy has an inexplicable urge to try and justify being a cuck to anybody who will listen, or in your case, write some lame assed story about craving sloppy seconds, and staying married to a cheating slut.

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by Johnny1M04/22/14

I would say the author just mailed it in.

There is no real conclusion. We don't find out what happens when the girls leave. He doesn't love his wife, but doesn't seem that angry.. Not even with his daughters for not telling him for over two years. We don't find out why this happened. The story is depressing with not much conflict and no resolution. That's the definition of a bad story.

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by imanonone04/22/14

another great JPB story.

Keep it up Bob.

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by Kiddo100104/22/14

Doesn't Work

Bob,

Same as usual. Frank is just a cuckhold. Challenge for you JPB. Let just one of your male leads get some balls, just once, Bob.

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by toolman424304/22/14

JPB= Just Pass the Balls

I agree he lost them long ago, not only does he get off being a wimp,he probably
gets off on use bashing him on here.So i doubt he'll stop with these weak as male
leads in his stories.

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by textosterone04/22/14

Nothing in this story was believable

Why stay together when the kids are already in their teens?
Any guy would want to know why. And to that end... if she can stop that easily then
why did she do it in the first place.

If you don't answer "why?" then there is no story.

No believable.

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by spredm04/22/14

Girls

He should do a DNA on his girls

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by Harryin VA04/22/14

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boring

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by Harryin VA04/22/14

the 2 cunt daughters

What makes the story so ridiculous is that once the husband has full knowledge of the cunt whore wife activities ... He swears that the marriage is over and that it's not going to stand. And yet a few paragraphs later they are still married.??

The suppose of explanation WHY the idiot been decided to keep the facade of the marriage together makes no sense since the girls already knew what was going on ... and the knew for more 2 years.

16 year old kids that decide it is OK for dad to be a cuckold and NOT say word 1 to their mom about respecting their father... are not by definition kids which are worthy of being concerned about.

Even worse was their decision to keep that information separate from their dad because it was in their best interest to do so. Perhaps the kids thought that the mom was only fucking One man? Although that clearly is unlikely given the story.
If they really believed that their mom was only having a fair with one man ... then once they found out however from their father that she was fucking a LOT and LOTS of other men the daughters reaction SHOULD of been very different
.
The fact that they did not react this way means that the new to what sort of horrible cunt / whore their mom was and they were perfectly willing to accept the risk that your father might catch a STD or DIE from his ignorance of catching for example AIDS.

This is a terrible awful story filled with monster plot holes and motivations and make no sense

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by bandyou04/22/14

I liked it

Good read as always

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by LostOneThere04/22/14

This story made

absolutely no sense. I see the moral as "fuck around with your entire company, fathers will always stay for the kids. Then your pussy will blind and bind them to you no matter what." He never even bothered with condoms even after getting checked out... or did he even bother to do that? The idiot is an accident waiting to happen.

Damn, another gold plated pussy story.

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by Lickideesplit04/22/14

Gotta go with 1516

The twins find out at 14. They have few other female role models. A lot of the comments assume that early teens have the empathy and emotional maturity of middle-age adults. Hubby staying in the same house allows him to discuss the hurt he suffers, and the consequences of the adjusted relationship (NO, not the 'creampie curtailment' part, you filthy reader!) May not be (IS NOT) the ideal way to raise two female teens, but Sweetie inadvertently squashed that two years ago! Best of the options Hubby is left with! No kids in the picture? BTB over a slow flame!!!

Main quibble is the likelihood of Sweetie going 'cold turkey' on her penchant for 'hot cock!' But, looking at her fuck-buddy choices, career-gain seems to be more of a motive than giant, indefatigable peckers! Resigning her job was a good device to make it a bit more plausible!

Frankly, I would have preferred that Hubby discuss, with the twins, that they start giving clues to Mom that they have known about her extra-curricular activity for a long time! Once that secret is 'outed', Sweetie could then give them MUCH better advice about how to NOT screw up a (NO - three) good relationship(s)!

5*

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by Drbeamer333304/22/14

Meh

It is certainly admirable to think that this woman could change and finally become the wife she should have been all along. I feel like that was what you were going for. Kids connive to keep mom and dad together, wife fights to keep her marriage, etc. And the readers applaud the tale of reconciliation. only problem is that it ridiculously stretches the bounds of reason, and you made no attempt to flesh out the plot to make it somehow reasonable. At the end of the day, the reader has to be able to accept your premise. No reasonable person could accept that this wife could suddenly stop screwing everyone in sight and become faithful. No reasonable husband would accept that. She was screwing around because she was a sex addict, had no respect for the husband, was being blackmailed, or some other reason. You made it seem like she was doing it just because, no real reason. It is just what she did to pass the time. Really? And because of that, she was just able to stop cold. Impossible. Unless you give the reader some compelling reason to accept that notion.

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by TMSPTGR304/22/14

Cast of Repellant Characters

Wife, daughters, and Frank are some of the most repellant characters I have come across.

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by MattblackUK04/22/14

5* read, of course.

Some people will not like this story. Why? Because it's too realistic.

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by gatorhermit04/22/14

Typical JPB characters ...

Note that the wife never apologizes or shows any remorse - nobody writes women better than JPB and PapaToad. The only thing she refrained from was blaming hubby for her wayward ways. I think I would wait until the girls went to college and then attempt to upgrade, a la "Fifth Place."

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by slaverowan04/22/14

Repugnant

Sick cuck story

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by bruce2204/23/14

Mystery Tale

Typical JPB from beginning to end full of strange twists, a perhaps nympho for a wife,
and a lazy man in the cuckold seat. We do not know Why or What...

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio04/23/14

I hate to say this but . . .

I feel this story is just boilerplate JPB. Similar to a lawyer's use of a template for a will, JPB writes story after formula story, 2-3 page length, reasonably-good writing, generally written in the first person, with hubby torn as-to what he will do when his wife's cheating stares him in the face. Further, the ending nearly always fails to fully resolve the marital conflict. Fun read as per usual, but not much different than many other recent JPB stories. Three stars.

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by SparksWillFly04/23/14

A Clinker

Keeping that 800 pound gorilla in the room by design is a recipe for mutual lifelong drudgery. You figure it out.

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by IronDragon04/23/14

JPB Fucking with the Status Quo again. LOL

Hubby kept Wifey around as a sex slave. Not my choice for dealing with a cheater, but JPB, in his own twisted way, made it work.

3 Stars.

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by DB7104/23/14

More realistic than not

I had an uncle and aunt who ended up staying together till my cousins were out of the house. Then they divorced. It happened much like this in that, they were more like roommates than spouces. But there were always "loud discussions" that affected everyone. In the end I think their staying together did as much, if not more, damage than if they just divorced as soon as whatever happened, happened. Both my cousins have problems with relationships as adults.

I did ask my uncle years later what happened between them. He wouldn't tell me the cause, only that it was bad enough that he couldn't stay married to her. Anyway, this story kinda reminded me about what happened to them.

I enjoyed the story, thanks Bob.

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by Huedogg204/23/14

I agree with D71

It does more damage than good. The kids tend to be jaded when the parents stay together in a loveless home. The have issues in their own marriages. The ones that survive the divorce have their issue to but get along with their parents better.

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by patillie04/23/14

JPG you published this story before

Maybe I am not in the new submissions section, so sorry for the criticism if I am not

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by WoodyKC04/23/14

Decent writing

But weak male and finish, disappointing overall. I like to enjoy reading, this wasn't.

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by sugna04/24/14

To Stay or to Go

One thing is certain, get divorced and the father will only see his kids once in a while. Few divorces are amicable and the kids are always in the middle. At least if you stay married you can protect the children from their crazy mother and the losers she would otherwise bring home. Marriage and family is not all about "love and happiness" a lot of it is about filling the roles and being there to do that. Divorced parents inevitably are not as connected to the kids because they are developing there external lives and splitting their time. In this case the wife's behavior was extreme and could be considered pathological. It was very self destructive and risky behavior. She clearly has serious mental problems and is likely an unfit mother. Even so, if you were foolish to take that to court and the judge will fuck you with it. So, there are many out there, just doing time until the kids go to college. Most of them are not even cheaters, just miserable people who did not want to put in the work that a marriage takes!

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by chilleywilley04/24/14

Probably truer than we like to admit

I guess at 16 the girls are old enough to tell, but not to discuss details, or maybe it's just me. A lot of couples Are in a companion marriage where sex is a thing of the past, and one of the partners has settled for it. If he likes lots of sex, he's setting it. And he gets along with the wife. Many many people have it worse.

Maybe JPB w as too truthful here. Real marriages can be like that.

Chilley

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by LeFrog0804/25/14

I would have...

...kicked her cheating ass out on the street, where it belongs and gone BTB...

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by carvohi04/25/14

A five, but oh my...

Good story, original, easy to read, emotional.

First, always put the children first and you did.

Second, yes the girls acted selfishly, but they were in that 12-18 range when selfish is very normal. I know this as an observable fact.

Third, and here's my problem. What she did would gnaw at me night and day. Our protagonist saw her! He had to bear it for two years until the girls went to college. How humiliating! If the two years hadn't destroyed me then the day they left for college would be the day I moved out. I would have walked out and never looked back.

Fourth, I don't care what anybody else said you did finish this story.

Last, everything you write is fun to read. You set a high standard. Thanks! Jedd Clampett

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by Anonymous04/27/14

Another Cuckold tale from JPB

The King of the Cuckold authors is back and more pathetic than ever!

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by sdc9207805/31/14

He's a forgiving father

Cheating wife and daughters who knew and said nothing would all be dead to me.

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by fifteen1608/09/14

Detractors

Carvohi and Chilleywilly have it right, this is closer to reality than most stories on this site, thoughts of "look before you leap" "making the best of a bad job" come to mind, I think that one day they will have the conversation which would make a very interesting read, however bad a situation sometimes the only way is forward establishing a better understanding of each other and lead to a stronger relationship, a big factor in this situation is age what you may do in your twenties is not necessarily the best thing to do in your forties, life is fraught with many problems and we are not perfect " there's many a slip twixt cup and lip", consider the alternatives, there is no perfect solution.

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by FD4508/09/14

fifteen16

I think this is more than a little dry and consequence free. What is happening to her? Nothing. She gets as much sex as she wants on HER terms and the man doesn't seem to care.

There were elaborate rationalizations why 'we need to keep acting normal' but there is very little 'normal' after finding out your wife is the company pin cushion. And this is literally the case.

Bob does dialogue and rationalizations to a treat, but his emoting sucks rocks. Except for the husband's inner dialogue, what has changed between what Maxine had before and what she has now? Nothing except he makes her kiss him in the cheek. Nothing except she doesn't get her pussy eaten. Cry me a river! She isn't even having to quit her job! She shows no sense that she is suffering at all. I don't mandate suffering, but the absolutely flat reaction of both people is jaw dropping. One crying jag on her part. A gut twist on his.

Compare this to the (sometimes overwrought) work to TheUnorginalist. There you got a sense that the man felt something.

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by Anonymous09/02/14

puke

This pussy whipped piece of shit makes me want to puke. After 18 years she probably decided she had to try and find a real man. If I found out my daughters had withheld this information from me, I would have disowned them. The three bitches belong together. Every one of those mother fuckers would be eating through straws and their voices would be three octaves higher. If she would not have agreed to my terms of divorce........well, accidents do happen. JPB stands for just pussy Bob. One fucking star....and that's one too many.

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by spredm09/04/14

real life

This happens to men more than you think, young daughters find out don't want to hurt Dad, he finds out, knows what he is going to lose if divorces, just lives with it

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by Ambivalence09/29/14

How much bullshit can be fit in one story...?

She cheats on him and he doesn't want a divorce for the kid's sake... ok, I can buy that...
He doesn't believe she'll be faithful after confronting her and gets himself tested... also believable...

But then he doesn't insist on condoms with her at all times...? Not likely - otherwise why bother getting tested since clearly either he suddenly believes in her fidelity or trusts all of her potential sex partners, neither of which are even remotely believable.

And that's clearly the kind of thing where he points out to his daughters when he finds out their boyfriends or husbands or significant others are cheating on them years later that he will, of course, follow their lead and not tell them since obviously he'd rather they be able to be deluded and live in their lie than know the truth... especially since the daughters ALSO put his health at risk. But that's ok, after all, they didn't want their parents divorced. So what if he got sick or died as a result.

And so what if she knows that the kids know...? Let her realize that she's been so blatant about it that her own children have been effected, that she's messed things up for them as well - is there really an end to the amount of unhappiness he should want HER to experience...?

And what's this crap about her asking his permission before dancing with other guys because "she's his and always has been"...?!? What part of fucking other guys figures into that load of crap...?

And him wondering at the end if he maybe did anything that caused her to do it...??? What could he possibly have done that wouldn't have been OBVIOUS to even him that would result in her slutting around, especially in their home...?

Here's the answer to your question, hubby... what you did wrong is either marry a slut or at least a woman who couldn't (or worse yet didn't want to) keep herself from BECOMING a slut.

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by Bfreetorun01/20/15

I liked the story but I would have made one addition.

I would have sued the shit out of her company, her boss and everyone that I knew or guessed that had screwed her. He wimped out on that, too.

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by Anonymous02/21/15

So he stayed for the kids

Don't know how he could stomach looking at his cheating wife. She never really did seem very sorry for her actions. And I really found it hard to believe he let all the men that screwed her get away with it. He needed to retire on the lawsuits he filed against them and the Companies they worked for. That way he could have gotten custody, had a nice house for the girls and been rid of the slut. The usual well told JPB story with a terrible conclusion.

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by FD4503/11/15

Seeing it the wrong way

It wasn't about creameries lurking goodness or a lack of character on his part. It was simple math.

Was Love(kids) + love (lifestyle) > or < Hatred(wife)?

So instead of cursing him for his lack of hate, I'll bless him for the love of his daughters.

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