There is no erotic coupling taking place. Frontlinecaster probably reported it as a snuff story, (which it's not) and laurel moved it. It's about time she decided whose site this is, his or hers?
I'v noticed the latest work by Colinthedog was moved here from LW and Bretease newest tale was posting in EC as well which makes zero sense considering what the stories in question are about. Maybe reading a story before you move it might not be a bad idea!
As for FLC, Just ban the asshole causing the problem and be done with it.
This was submitted to Loving wives and not this category! Firstly 'they' refused it because they claimed it contained unexacceptable material which it didn't and now they put it into the wrong category! What's going wrong with Lit? What a bloody mess! How am I going to sort this out please? Fair puts me off my beer it does.
Slirpuff's newest one got moved here to EC too, and my previous LW submission got moved to Non-Con. Lit needs to get their heads out of their 4th points of contact.
This one was a 5 Star tale, though. Loved it, Brit! Keep holding the line across the pond, brother! :D
I liked this one a lot, despite LW's re- (and wrong-) categorization.
As to the story, very slick and clever. I dug it's premise and ambiguity. Pretty clever shit.
This new practice of the Lit powers that be moving revenge and consequence/cheating stories out of LW and into EC is baffling. There is a long history of these types of stories (including REALLY good ones by such LW legends as Britease, Ohio, Longhorn, Renquist, DQS1, HDK, and others) being part of the LW landscape. Why boot these stories now?
And, for the love of god, why to EC, of all places? Surely, they fit more in LW than in EC.....
I have no idea what the fuck is going on, but it's a slippery slope. How much revenge or anger or angst is allowed before a story gets booted from LW? Does the protag hubby actually have to slurp another man's jizz from his wife's pussy for the story to stay there? Recockulous.
This was a lot of fun. Coming up on that surprise ending tickled my fancy. Great job of sucking the world in.
Thank you for writing.
5*
Regards,
-Pultoy
As palatable as palettable ponderings purport to be. Which merely leaves the question, do our palates have a propensity towards stories of pallets or are we merely poisoned against the palletless. Perplexing.
Wow, I love how DeYaKen thinks I'm all powerful at getting stories moved around. How would I have reported this story and gotten it moved before it was ever posted? Clearly someone is finally catching on that you assholes don't belong in Loving Wives and perhaps making that category worth reading again.
But it's alright Ken, you're still all butt hurt about one of your shitty stories getting removed because you wrote snuff porn to cover for not having the ability to write a story about real characters. Keep blaming me for everything that goes wrong.
This story should have been in the LW category, not EC. The annoying thing is that it probably should have had two to three times more readers in LW, as well as far more comments and discussion. Britease, you was robbed.
Yes its a terribly sad, tragic, unforseen, accident. Gwen you are inconsolable right now, but if there is love left for us I'd like to try. Why don't you lie... down try and rest a bit. I give you some time to rest I'll just head over to the pub for a pint. Then we can talk when I return. *~*.
Never in a million years. She cheated on him for 6 months, then ambushed him and left him with everything all planned out. Change those locks real quick before she has a chance to get back. Get to the lawyer before her and file the papers. It didn't go the way she expected, so what. Let her lose. Thanks for the short but entertaining story with a nice twist at the end.
I've read this several times, and the more times I read it, the more I think it would be even better if there was a few paragraphs added with the wife coming home, or trying to come home. Excellent read.
Arrangements to join Gerald as fast as possible. She could jump in front of a train, or just go to her husbands job site and have them drop some pallets on her. Then she can be with the love of her life in a nice hot place reserved for adulterous people.
"if I'd said the right thing at that moment then she'd call the whole stupid thing off." - Why?! She's already been cheating with "Gerald" for months! MAYBE if she hadn't already cheated, and was waiting until she left Mike to cheat, he might want to call it off, but why now?
LOL, I had an evil thought that it was Gerry that got killed in the accident!
No way I would take her back, barmaid or not! Again, if she hadn't already been cheating, maybe, but not with the cheating on record.
English
I THINK MIKEY REALLY DOES LIKE IT THIS TIME
he could possibly get all the cake, icing, ice cream and get to keep all the presents, TK U MLJ LV NV
5*
Short, to the point and very entertaining :)
Why is this in EC instead of LW tho?
Why is this story in erotic couplings ?
There is no erotic coupling taking place. Frontlinecaster probably reported it as a snuff story, (which it's not) and laurel moved it. It's about time she decided whose site this is, his or hers?
100% agree with DeYaKen here.
I'v noticed the latest work by Colinthedog was moved here from LW and Bretease newest tale was posting in EC as well which makes zero sense considering what the stories in question are about. Maybe reading a story before you move it might not be a bad idea!
As for FLC, Just ban the asshole causing the problem and be done with it.
Authors complaint!!!!!!!
This was submitted to Loving wives and not this category! Firstly 'they' refused it because they claimed it contained unexacceptable material which it didn't and now they put it into the wrong category! What's going wrong with Lit? What a bloody mess! How am I going to sort this out please? Fair puts me off my beer it does.
Nice Flash Tale
Certainly belongs in LW and does not even have an Erotic Coupling! Where is the FTDS chorus which always accompanies this kind of story?
They're doing it to other BTB authors too.
Slirpuff's newest one got moved here to EC too, and my previous LW submission got moved to Non-Con. Lit needs to get their heads out of their 4th points of contact.
This one was a 5 Star tale, though. Loved it, Brit! Keep holding the line across the pond, brother! :D
I liked this one a lot, despite LW's re- (and wrong-) categorization.
As to the story, very slick and clever. I dug it's premise and ambiguity. Pretty clever shit.
This new practice of the Lit powers that be moving revenge and consequence/cheating stories out of LW and into EC is baffling. There is a long history of these types of stories (including REALLY good ones by such LW legends as Britease, Ohio, Longhorn, Renquist, DQS1, HDK, and others) being part of the LW landscape. Why boot these stories now?
And, for the love of god, why to EC, of all places? Surely, they fit more in LW than in EC.....
I have no idea what the fuck is going on, but it's a slippery slope. How much revenge or anger or angst is allowed before a story gets booted from LW? Does the protag hubby actually have to slurp another man's jizz from his wife's pussy for the story to stay there? Recockulous.
Good Twist
may have been a short story, however the punch line fact was still very effective
Fun one
This was a lot of fun. Coming up on that surprise ending tickled my fancy. Great job of sucking the world in.
Thank you for writing.
5*
Regards,
-Pultoy
Cute Comes to Mind
For an author whose male leads are usually soppy reconcilers, this was refreshing. Nice.
To The Point
Most of the times it's not the length but the quality...
I'm speaking of story length... get your minds out of the gutter...
And why are they moving stories around like this one???
Yeeeup... that's the way the pallet tumbles.
Good'n Brit, good'n.
Thanks for sharing on Lit.
x
GOT ME!
Great turn at the end...well done!
Palletable --- Smirk
I ask you?
Indeed
As palatable as palettable ponderings purport to be. Which merely leaves the question, do our palates have a propensity towards stories of pallets or are we merely poisoned against the palletless. Perplexing.
As a story, this was quite
"palettable" (smirk)...
Well...
My wife is more than satisfied with my length and quality.
*whistles innocently* :D
SOMETIMES
the husband isn't the last to know, TK U MLJ LV NV
Wow, I love how DeYaKen thinks I'm all powerful at getting stories moved around. How would I have reported this story and gotten it moved before it was ever posted? Clearly someone is finally catching on that you assholes don't belong in Loving Wives and perhaps making that category worth reading again.
But it's alright Ken, you're still all butt hurt about one of your shitty stories getting removed because you wrote snuff porn to cover for not having the ability to write a story about real characters. Keep blaming me for everything that goes wrong.
Enjoyed it
A fun read.
Great Shortie*****
Thanks for sharing.
Predictable
But in a good way.
I see your point
This story should have been in the LW category, not EC. The annoying thing is that it probably should have had two to three times more readers in LW, as well as far more comments and discussion. Britease, you was robbed.
Too Short
I've liked most of your short stories, but this one cries out for more.
Still 4* for what there was.
I vote for
Taking her back, after laying down the law and having her on a short leash. Depending, of course, on the barmaid.
If she comes back.
Yes its a terribly sad, tragic, unforseen, accident. Gwen you are inconsolable right now, but if there is love left for us I'd like to try. Why don't you lie... down try and rest a bit. I give you some time to rest I'll just head over to the pub for a pint. Then we can talk when I return. *~*.
Take Her Back?
Never in a million years. She cheated on him for 6 months, then ambushed him and left him with everything all planned out. Change those locks real quick before she has a chance to get back. Get to the lawyer before her and file the papers. It didn't go the way she expected, so what. Let her lose. Thanks for the short but entertaining story with a nice twist at the end.
5 star
Great fun this dark little tale is.... more please!
5*
I've read this several times, and the more times I read it, the more I think it would be even better if there was a few paragraphs added with the wife coming home, or trying to come home. Excellent read.
Gwen should make....
Arrangements to join Gerald as fast as possible. She could jump in front of a train, or just go to her husbands job site and have them drop some pallets on her. Then she can be with the love of her life in a nice hot place reserved for adulterous people.
Thoughts
"if I'd said the right thing at that moment then she'd call the whole stupid thing off." - Why?! She's already been cheating with "Gerald" for months! MAYBE if she hadn't already cheated, and was waiting until she left Mike to cheat, he might want to call it off, but why now?
LOL, I had an evil thought that it was Gerry that got killed in the accident!
No way I would take her back, barmaid or not! Again, if she hadn't already been cheating, maybe, but not with the cheating on record.
fantasy guy
The question, would he take her back? Not likely.
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