by irishlass101
You were a little weak on the intensity for the first part of the story, but the need and aching in the last chapter was beautiful! Think you can write Heath's story for the 'next life'?
I love the way you wrapped so much intensity into the story, but i was a little disapointed in the fact that Chris seemed like a slut at some parts. Other than that, great story.
Great series, as always! Heath will be missed, perhaps some additional stories in his memory?