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A Touching Climax

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by LordSlamdawgg04/24/14

predictable but worthy twist

The acorn didn't fall far from tree and was greatly overshadowed... this time.

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by Anonymous11/14/14

Learn spelling and grammar or get an editor.

"There other son was eight."
That was as far as I got. Learn spelling and grammar or get an editor.

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by Anonymous03/09/15

50/50

I'm guessing you wanted to rush the story and finish it, but the first half is good and I give you credit for that. To the grammar police, "There, their, they're" or any other type of word that is easily error-ridden... give it a rest. The author did a fine job regardless.

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