I can't wait for the next installment and yes you are teasing the hell out of your readers, but that's ok. Keep it going. Perhaps a little editing wouldn't hurt, but so far it is nice to read the story developing into a very hot piece.
Just need one clarification; did his marriage fall apart because he admitted to his wife an incestuous relationship with his sister. This was very vaguely insinuated.
Thank you for the feedback, and thank you for being patient. I just finished the third and final part to this particular series. It's currently pending, so, look back in a couple days. I promise, it's not another tease.
English
I thought this was great, but I wish you wrote the complete story, instead of parceling it out in short segments.
Premature ejaculation
That's the only way I can describe these few paragraphs. Write the full story and post it. These little driblets are a waste of your readers' time.
Garbage.
I hate fucking teasers.
Patience
I can't wait for the next installment and yes you are teasing the hell out of your readers, but that's ok. Keep it going. Perhaps a little editing wouldn't hurt, but so far it is nice to read the story developing into a very hot piece.
Just need one clarification; did his marriage fall apart because he admitted to his wife an incestuous relationship with his sister. This was very vaguely insinuated.
That might develop into another great segway.
Oz
Hello readers.
Thank you for the feedback, and thank you for being patient. I just finished the third and final part to this particular series. It's currently pending, so, look back in a couple days. I promise, it's not another tease.
Oh yes!
There's something wonderfully sexy about a grandma giving a hand job. Great story and love your Grandma character.
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