Just a Night at the Bar

Thank you...

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

Fun

Nicely done but I felt I knew the plot in the first lines. It was just a question of details which were nicely done...

Damn that was good.

I knew that those two were married, too cute!

I too figured out they were together and running a scam on those fools. I kind of skipped the middle of the story and just read the last part to see if my guess was right.

The story was still good even with me guessing the outcome early on.

Ptedictible but funny all the same!

saw it coming,

Saw the scam coming, but still well written and funny.

Fun little story

...but I saw the scam coming a mile away.

You are a tricky little bastard, aren't you

A cute and entertaining story; harmless -- except to the two wanna-be ass men (ha, ha)! 5*

Thanks!

Thanks to everyone who read and commented. I have to admit that I wrote this and proofed it in less than 2 hours. I could have made it a bit harder to figure out, but I was going for the humor more than the suspense. Also, those who know my work know that I don't write about alternative lifestyles in a positive light, so I guess it was pretty easy to figure out. lol

Glad most of you enjoyed it anyway. :)

Liked it.

Yes it was predictable, just like the names commenting, maybe we read to much porn?
Liked the humor especially the "cockpit" line. Loved the hot sex scene to finish because that's what it's all about.
5*

5* naturally ;3

I watched over his shoulder as he wrote this one and DAYUM!!!!! mmhmmmmmm!!!!!!

5*

Another entertaining read from ID :)

Hottttttttt

Im glad I found out you write!!!!! I agree with your wife DAMNNNN and the ending got me as well

Great Flash Story

Hey Princess, how did you say it? Dayyuuuumm!!! Agreed!!!! Very funny flash story. 5 stars. Enough said. Thanks for the entertainment.

A good story but I do prefer your darker ones.

5 stars

very sexy

I love it

Love, love, love that Sam & Laura are kinky and play "strangers who meet at the bar" and I especially LOVE that he makes a wager of it and gets the other men who flirt with his wife to pay him for having done so, he's a crafty guy.

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Hahaha!!!

Thx for the laugh! Absolutely loved the jet skirt cockpit line! Cute story.

An explanation.

"Strangers in a Bar" is one of our favorite games to play with each other. In this tale, I just took our game and turned it into a moneymaking opportunity for "Mark" and "Laura", to start making some extra money for their daughter's college fund. No, I don't do that part in real life, since the proceeds from my novels on Amazon go into our daughter's college fund account. Thank you for reading. :)

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Thanks for understanding. :)

I agree with Bruce...It was kind of a telegram!

WTF, you always get fives from me! Thanks for all you do.