All Comments on 'The Coven Ch. 06'

Your chapters are really short but so far they have me hooked. I am very interested to see how it ends.

Hurry pls. This is wonderful!

I have read stories here for just a short time. Less than a year. I have never really found any to comment on until now. You are amazing. I have to admit that you may have a novel in the makings. I will come back often in hopes of more. Thank you for a great read.

I lost my mojo for quite a while. I had a few personal issues but I dont believe in giving excuses. So just saying that - am sorry I dropped the ball, will submit a new chapter in few days.

I just started reading this story yesterday and I love it, I just saw you write a comment and I'm happy to know you haven't abandoned this story, I'll be waiting for your next entry.

I'm excited to read more. This story captured my attention whole heartedly. I read a lot and this could easily be one of my favorites.

You're continuing! One thing: there is something odd about the writing..you don't use "the" "a" always where you should. For example "Jade can see future"... Instead of "the future". I'm curious, is your first language Polish or something similar? My best friend was Polish and she had the same issue with articles in English. Anyway, would be nice to correct, as it breaks the flow, but otherwise, great job, looking forward to more.

I saw your feedback about grammar mistakes and have decided to get an editor. My next story however, is already submitted and will be out in some days. But from Ch. 08 all stories will be checked by an editor first.

Thanks for the lovely feedback and response.