how dumb can you be?ted is the father,uni is short for university,and yes tod is carol son.if you cant follow along let the teacher know so we can stop the class just for you.i will even give you a hint about where the story will probably go from here.tod and carol join them at the resort and the 5 of them end up fucking in an orgy type thing,dad will nail all 3 women, tod will fuck all 3 women then admit he has been in love with the daughter or his mom for years.you know the same old i had a good story then turned all the women into sluts story line.any quesions
Please have an editor review before posting. Lots of little mental speed bumps from grammar, punctuation and spelling. I do appreciate the "unusual" description of the ladies, not the typical status report of "5'3", 110, 36D, etc., etc." that is in the majority of stories. I like the pleasant pace of the story overall, although there does seem to be a lot of "oh, by the way" moments, meaning "we've talked about this before but here it is again for the reading audience" (i.e. Their lifestyle conversation). Please keep adding to this I really would like to read more!
Yes there may be some grammar issues in this story, but many of the best do also. I for one, would like to know how this storyline develops. Who gets together with Whom? Many possibilities just with the current characters. Carol even suggested that she and her son would be interested in going to a nudist resort for couples only.
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how dumb can you be?ted is the father,uni is short for university,and yes tod is carol son.if you cant follow along let the teacher know so we can stop the class just for you.i will even give you a hint about where the story will probably go from here.tod and carol join them at the resort and the 5 of them end up fucking in an orgy type thing,dad will nail all 3 women, tod will fuck all 3 women then admit he has been in love with the daughter or his mom for years.you know the same old i had a good story then turned all the women into sluts story line.any quesions
did i use too many big words or was my grammar wrong?truthfully i dont give a damn either way since i could atleast follow the story.
Nice start!
Please have an editor review before posting. Lots of little mental speed bumps from grammar, punctuation and spelling. I do appreciate the "unusual" description of the ladies, not the typical status report of "5'3", 110, 36D, etc., etc." that is in the majority of stories. I like the pleasant pace of the story overall, although there does seem to be a lot of "oh, by the way" moments, meaning "we've talked about this before but here it is again for the reading audience" (i.e. Their lifestyle conversation). Please keep adding to this I really would like to read more!
please continue
Yes there may be some grammar issues in this story, but many of the best do also. I for one, would like to know how this storyline develops. Who gets together with Whom? Many possibilities just with the current characters. Carol even suggested that she and her son would be interested in going to a nudist resort for couples only.
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