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Sweet and Spicy Horny Toads Ch. 19

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by freeman6404/26/14

Great writing

It is tough writing group stuff and particularly when there are many people. It is great.

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by Anonymous04/27/14

Confused

I don't consider myself a slow person, but I'm hopelessly lost trying to remember who is who in this story. What was once a manageable cast of characters has grown beyond your ability to make distinctive to the reader. Lesson learned (I hope!) for your next story.

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