Excellent tale, entirely believable and exciting.
Short but sweet. Loved it! I'd love to know what happens to them; Was that a 'One-Night-Stand', or does something more develop???
Good page,hope this is just a start of a few chapters for this couple,could be a nice short story,,,
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Excellent tale, entirely believable and exciting.
Too Short!
Short but sweet. Loved it! I'd love to know what happens to them; Was that a 'One-Night-Stand', or does something more develop???
Good,
Good page,hope this is just a start of a few chapters for this couple,could be a nice short story,,,
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