Thanks so much for a fun story and no technical errors on the Glock and such.
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Anonymous04/27/14
Lovely & Erotic
Hi.. its so lovely and erotic and shooting positives vibes on the reader
Thanks
-Neo
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Anonymous04/28/14
Great Story!
Wonderful story! Good build and scene set, good balance between erotic and life and best of all, no "Suspense of disbelief" for me. One of my top 3 stories on here! Thank you!!
You have been peeking into my life ilikeithot6308! Shakespeare was right, and she was right now. Alas, we did not last. But oh, those memories remain. Back in the days when the "Lady Smith" ruled and the "Glock" was but a girl. Be well!
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Anonymous01/03/15
Hot
Hot as hell. Hope you write like that. Ladycop story.
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Anonymous01/17/15
Fun story
Fun story, it made me smile.
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Anonymous03/09/15
Good story - but also would have liked a few more details - such as his name
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Anonymous04/02/15
Can't zip my pants
Obviously, I can't zip my pants because your story gave me such an erection I'll have to masturbate three times to make it soften so I can!!!!! This one is really hot and really got to me for some reason - they usually don't have that effect. If this is your normal style of writing I'll have to look you up instead of only reading chick's stories!
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Anonymous05/06/15
Hell of a story.
Extremely sexy. Nice to see someone write about the human aspect of a police officer, and not just portray the popo in a negative light. This is one of my favorite stories on here.
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05/12/15
Really HOT!
I loved this story. Hot and hotter!! Keep up the good work.
I've enjoyed your other tales more, and here's why...
You're a fine writer, and most of your stories that I've read involve greater character development than this one. But beyond character development, the key to a really good story is to have some sort of meaningful conflict ending with a resolution. This story had no real conflict. It was much more of a stroke story. And of course that's a specialty for this site. But you've shown an ability to take stories to the next level.
I didn't rate it at all, because I saw the high rating and don't want to spoil that for you. It's just not my cup of tea. Your longer stories usually hit the spot for me. Keep up the good work - just remember the need for a conflict and its resolution. Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous12/18/15
Awesome Read
Great build up. Love that there was no sadness just all love. Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!
good read
Righteous shoot all the way.
Great Fun
Thanks so much for a fun story and no technical errors on the Glock and such.
Lovely & Erotic
Hi.. its so lovely and erotic and shooting positives vibes on the reader
Thanks
-Neo
Great Story!
Wonderful story! Good build and scene set, good balance between erotic and life and best of all, no "Suspense of disbelief" for me. One of my top 3 stories on here! Thank you!!
I agree
Good story - really enjoyed it
Thanks
nice tale
nice tale but what does he do for a living? doesn`t matter I guess but
I think small bits like that add to the tale.
A nice love story
I loved it!!
You voyer you...
You have been peeking into my life ilikeithot6308! Shakespeare was right, and she was right now. Alas, we did not last. But oh, those memories remain. Back in the days when the "Lady Smith" ruled and the "Glock" was but a girl. Be well!
Hot
Hot as hell. Hope you write like that. Ladycop story.
Fun story
Fun story, it made me smile.
Good story - but also would have liked a few more details - such as his name
Can't zip my pants
Obviously, I can't zip my pants because your story gave me such an erection I'll have to masturbate three times to make it soften so I can!!!!! This one is really hot and really got to me for some reason - they usually don't have that effect. If this is your normal style of writing I'll have to look you up instead of only reading chick's stories!
Hell of a story.
Extremely sexy. Nice to see someone write about the human aspect of a police officer, and not just portray the popo in a negative light. This is one of my favorite stories on here.
Really HOT!
I loved this story. Hot and hotter!! Keep up the good work.
loved it
I liked it.
It works - even without the sex.
Hot cop
Smooth writing, great action and a love story at the end.
Brilliant.
I've enjoyed your other tales more, and here's why...
You're a fine writer, and most of your stories that I've read involve greater character development than this one. But beyond character development, the key to a really good story is to have some sort of meaningful conflict ending with a resolution. This story had no real conflict. It was much more of a stroke story. And of course that's a specialty for this site. But you've shown an ability to take stories to the next level.
I didn't rate it at all, because I saw the high rating and don't want to spoil that for you. It's just not my cup of tea. Your longer stories usually hit the spot for me. Keep up the good work - just remember the need for a conflict and its resolution. Thanks for sharing.
Awesome Read
Great build up. Love that there was no sadness just all love. Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!
More.
Definitely sequel worthy.
I liked it a lot: 5*****
Thanks. tom anon
Entertaining
A fun read. I would like to read more like it.
Thank you for writing this entertaining story.
I have always liked "cop stories".
App version is truncated
Great story but the Lit app version is truncated at "blast of".
sequel
sequel,
More
Sure hope there's more to this
i think you will be my favorite writer. good job whoever you are.
One of my favorite.
ilikeithot6308 is perhaps the best author on literotica
I've only read a few stories by ilikeithot6308 but they all have been well-constructed and grammatical, I envy the guy in the story.
Loved it!
Very cute and sweet story of love. Very sexy too!! Loved the interaction between the two characters.
Author, Great story, great plot, great characters led to a solid five throughout. Thank you for the romp which I truly enjoyed. MORE! jntiques
Good Story
As I said, good story, but the cop talk and gun references in the bedroom didn't make it for me.
Fun
Very good
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