All Comments on 'Sleeping Over'

Give Will a bit of hair for his muscular and masculine chest!

This is probably the most well written and beautiful erotic story I have read. Excellent work mate. And perhaps a second chapter?

This is one of the most beautiful and erotic stories I've ever read. I absolutely loved it! And I think this story could most definitely use another chapter. But please never stop writing!

Why substitute a few words(Sleeping In) and give it a new title when you can write a completely new story?

If as your note says this is the mainstream version of your incest story, I personally appreciate the edit to make it mainstream. I wouldn't have been able to enjoy the incest component despite the excellent quality of the writing and flow. So thanks for spending the time to make it available to a wider audience :)

I really liked this one, thanks for making it not incest x

This is beautiful. The wording and imagery were perfect. I could have cried... This is weird to say about an erotica story, but this is pure art.

i'm wet!! Loved it!!

That was amazing and I am very glad you undid the incest part, that would have dulled my pleasure. I will read this one again and again.

This was a very good storie keep up the vary good work.

MOTOWN

I envy your writing Wilfu1 and also your stories hero.

Wish I had got a Scarlett in my day.

very well written, this is the first of your writing that I have read and can't wait to read the rest. great work!

"Sweetie," ? .Sweetheart?" A 23 years old calling a teenager SWEETY? SWEETHEART? My goodness! He sounds a 60 years old man talking!

Possibly the best story i have ever read. The perfect amount of passion and tenderness blended together

This is definitely the best story I have ever read on this site. Absolutely fantastic. Will is the kind of guy I think anyone would want their first time to be with. Thank you for sharing this :)

This was one of those perfect older brother / boyfriend / friend stories, and I only wish more people would write stories like this... I would love to read a ch: 2, and see what happens next...

Perfect combo of sweet and innocent and passionately sexy. Sounds like the beginning of a potentially great future for these two. Well done! You planning a sequel?

Loved this story, gave it 5 stars. But would like to read a sequel to this.

You pretty much just copied sleeping in and just changed the names

So what if it's a mainstream rewrite of an incest story? It works so what's the big deal?

I liked the idea, but it's a shame so much was rehashed from the incest story.

Stick it up your fucking ass hole

I wish my first time had been like this. Your description of Scarlet was amazing!

This was such a cute story and your description of Scarlett was amazing!

I like this much better than an incest story. It's sweet.

Beautifully written thx for sharing. I like yr style of writing. An Aussie too even better to know Aussie men can be sweet sexy and loving so at once ;) xx