Sleeping Over

Good story

Give Will a bit of hair for his muscular and masculine chest!

beautiful

This is probably the most well written and beautiful erotic story I have read. Excellent work mate. And perhaps a second chapter?

Beautiful!

This is one of the most beautiful and erotic stories I've ever read. I absolutely loved it! And I think this story could most definitely use another chapter. But please never stop writing!

Waste of time

Why substitute a few words(Sleeping In) and give it a new title when you can write a completely new story?

Appreciated

If as your note says this is the mainstream version of your incest story, I personally appreciate the edit to make it mainstream. I wouldn't have been able to enjoy the incest component despite the excellent quality of the writing and flow. So thanks for spending the time to make it available to a wider audience :)

mainstream edit much appreciated

I really liked this one, thanks for making it not incest x

Holy Crap!

This is beautiful. The wording and imagery were perfect. I could have cried... This is weird to say about an erotica story, but this is pure art.

wow!!

i'm wet!! Loved it!!

Beautiful!

That was amazing and I am very glad you undid the incest part, that would have dulled my pleasure. I will read this one again and again.

OUTSTANDIMG

This was a very good storie keep up the vary good work.
MOTOWN

I am envious/

I envy your writing Wilfu1 and also your stories hero.
Wish I had got a Scarlett in my day.

wow!

very well written, this is the first of your writing that I have read and can't wait to read the rest. great work!

"Sweetie," ? .Sweetheart?" A 23 years old calling a teenager SWEETY? SWEETHEART? My goodness! He sounds a 60 years old man talking!

Possibly the best story i have ever read. The perfect amount of passion and tenderness blended together

Wow

This is definitely the best story I have ever read on this site. Absolutely fantastic. Will is the kind of guy I think anyone would want their first time to be with. Thank you for sharing this :)

More to Come???

This was one of those perfect older brother / boyfriend / friend stories, and I only wish more people would write stories like this... I would love to read a ch: 2, and see what happens next...

Nice!

Perfect combo of sweet and innocent and passionately sexy. Sounds like the beginning of a potentially great future for these two. Well done! You planning a sequel?

Loved this story, gave it 5 stars. But would like to read a sequel to this.

you, just wow

You pretty much just copied sleeping in and just changed the names