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Enduring a Hen Party

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by NYCSeparatedWM5004/27/14

Loved it!

I enjoyed this story - it had a couple of unexpected twists and turns, was vivid and realistic, and well written - thanks for writing and sharing!

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by Screenwriter6605/01/14

Psychological Realsim

One of the simple failures of most erotica is not drawing the reader into an authentic world of people and emotions. I felt her boredom, her embarrassment, and her desire to get off by herself. The ending was a little expected, but it allowed for the realistic staging of being watched. Anyway, I look forward to more from you...

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by Anonymous05/05/14

Add my COCK to your hen party. Cock a doodle doo

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