One Hell of a Night

Good Story.

I guess the idiots that run lit have made enough money they think fucking up the site to spite people who are not into their bi-gay agenda, who don't think jacking off watching your life partner get gang banged by your work mates is hot.Why not have a place to put cuckold stories and save everyone this grief, oh that's right you do, its called fetish.

Loved it

Talking to her might help with closure but nothing more. Loved the revenge on her boss.

That's more like it!

Now What Ch3 had me worried about you; but this was great!

Everybody Please!!

Turn Auto-Complete and Auto-Correct the fuck-off and always know that spell check just fucking hates you, really, really hates you. All of these convenience features were written by Comp. Sci. majors whose perfect 4.0 average were ruined by the 1.7's they received in their English Classes. Good story though

Yuck

Your worst writing yet. The plot was good, characters not so great, the revenge was perfect, pity about your lack of basic English writing skills though, really spoilt the whole thing for me. 1 *

Bravo

I like your thinking, especially the end paragraph. Yes willing cuckolds need a brain transplant at the very least. Finally a story with balls.
5 stars.

Jusr like christening a ship, except thing don't fall out.

You did alright

Normally I don't spend much time on one page stories but you did alright with this one. While it was short it made its point. The characters were not overly developed nor with overly exagerated features on women we are going to end up hating anyway.

Yes, the spellcheck gave you problems like it has for many others on this site but I try to keep in mind that I'm reading postings from amateur writers that are just trying to tell a story. Frankly, in your shoes I wouldn't worry about the spellcheck on the first pass through but would engage a decent editor to help you. Worrying about spelling, grammer and such would bog you down and distract you from just telling the story. Let the story flow and then go back and clean it up, with help as needed.

I look forward to your next posting.

HOW FAR IS TOO FAR

and when is not enough, TK U MLJ LV NV

Good Tale!

An enjoyable tale that was entertaining. I never understand the reason that you have to talk to the cheater and find out why. She cheated-divorce. The only comment I have is he needed something heavier than a bottle to make sure the big guy stayed down. He did right getting rid of her.

From Duna

I did not read this story previously. I think that was when Lauren wanted to dedicate the Loving Wives to only the sexual minority men stories (cuckolding life style stories) and the editors wanted to move the sexual majority husbands stories to other hubs.
My stories were moved to Fetish before my prohibition on Literotica.
I recommended to my Author fellows that time TO OCCOPY ROMANCE HUB WITH SUCH STORIES HOW THE BETRAYED EX HUSBANDS FIND SECOND-THIRD WOMEN TO BE HAPPY. THE AUTHORS COULD WRITE THE CHEATING WIVES BTB PART IN THE FIRST HALF OF THE STORIES. I think Lauren imagined that picture the Romance hub full of stories where the betrayed ex husbands by cheating wives finds happiness new women was not good future..................
BTW 5*****

From Duna again

I think to fill second-third chance success stories the Romance hub had been a good revenge...................

Nice BTB fantasy, but SO unrealistic

No place I know of lets him go home that night without the Police being involved. He even wrote his wife a letter that could have been used as evidence against him. No wife I know lets him throw her under the bus without a fight. She would have been looking for alimony, part of his retirement and at least 50% of the assets. And why didn't he sue the Company looking for reparation for his wife and her boyfriend screwing on Company time if he really wanted revenge? Interesting fiction about getting rid of a wife. But after all those years he didn't want to know why or how long? Maybe it was something they could work through. Even for a dumb cuckold he sure tossed a long term marriage onto the trash heap without much work to save it.

Anonypukes

I hate damned anonypussies that would forgive a bitch for shitting in his cornflakes! One of them said he should have tried to work through their problems? That fucking ass wipe should go fuck his self.

re: Nice BTB fantasy, but SO unrealistic

the only thing unrealistic was your fucking comment. Dude, he got rid of the whore. That's all he wanted. Not everyone has a 401K, she made more than him, no alimony. And as a security guard, we only call the cops when management ask us to do so. It was a scuffle, not a shoot out.

Read This A Number of Times

Still like the visual of FedExing the teeth. Classic. So what if it might be unrealistic. It's still a great flash story. Thanks again for posting.

one of my favorites

one of my favorites I just hadn't favorite until now. So true that he did not fight for her since she was already gone. The fight "was strictly for me" was a great line and truth for this story. Short and too the point. Well written

*****

Reread and it is still a darn good tale..