Loved Your entire story and how about a suggestion...
As I read this well written, exciting, and well planned story, and compared it with your story on the son becoming the alpha male, just think how overwhelmingly exciting and strong it would be for a separate story with a girl like Katie who becomes he alpha daughter who dominates, and overwhelmingly pleases, both mom and dad as she coordinates all sexual activities of her parents as well as sharing them with her girlfriends, boyfriends, relatives, and other parents......!
This series was so hot, tender, intimate and loving. Loved every minute of it. Could have used some more all-family sex at the end, it kind of rushed for the finish line. But all-in-all it was outstanding. Great writing and vocabulary. A little bit more proofreading perhaps, but that was just small stuff. (I write some stuff, too, so maybe I'm a little too critical. Lush stories. I have to come here for the lusty incest stuff now.)
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Loved Your entire story and how about a suggestion...
As I read this well written, exciting, and well planned story, and compared it with your story on the son becoming the alpha male, just think how overwhelmingly exciting and strong it would be for a separate story with a girl like Katie who becomes he alpha daughter who dominates, and overwhelmingly pleases, both mom and dad as she coordinates all sexual activities of her parents as well as sharing them with her girlfriends, boyfriends, relatives, and other parents......!
What a wondeful series...
This series was so hot, tender, intimate and loving. Loved every minute of it. Could have used some more all-family sex at the end, it kind of rushed for the finish line. But all-in-all it was outstanding. Great writing and vocabulary. A little bit more proofreading perhaps, but that was just small stuff. (I write some stuff, too, so maybe I'm a little too critical. Lush stories. I have to come here for the lusty incest stuff now.)
Again, kudos and keep on writing! Happy New Year.
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