Thank you thank you thank you! This story is shaping up very nicely; Erica is clearly a complex character and is just dominant enough to be intriguing, without spilling over into being tacky. I can't wait to find out what happens when Harper realises 'Dream Girl' is very, very real, and what she actually is.
As has been mentioned though; it is a little... odd that Erica could kill an elder with apparent ease. If nothing else, shouldn't she get more than an apparent slap on the wrist from Riley?
Either way I want to read more, please?
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if she can kill an elder then why can she not kill the other dick?
Wohoo! I've been waiting for this! :D
Thank you thank you thank you! This story is shaping up very nicely; Erica is clearly a complex character and is just dominant enough to be intriguing, without spilling over into being tacky. I can't wait to find out what happens when Harper realises 'Dream Girl' is very, very real, and what she actually is.
As has been mentioned though; it is a little... odd that Erica could kill an elder with apparent ease. If nothing else, shouldn't she get more than an apparent slap on the wrist from Riley?
Either way I want to read more, please?
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