Hailey's Story

Lovely and well written

But it is a non con story.
Look forward to the next ( longer) chapter

nice start

Hi!

this is a nice non-con story, i hope to read more of it very soon!!!

Good Start

Hi,

A good start to a promising non-consent story. I look forward to many more chapters

That was a fine beginning!

You have a lot of talent, xckid77, but you should pay more attention to your presentation. Read everything through and don't rely on spell-checkers. This should also have been in Non-Consent, but for a newcomer, that is pardonable!

Well done - I look forward to reading much more. Five stars and welcome to Literotica.

This is a nonconsent story and does not belong in this category. Maybe it will after she is abused and given several rounds with the bitch's magical twat, turning her into a mindless sex doll. So, please move it to noncon, or maybe the saphotic love section.

A good start

This has the makings of a good story, but it definitely belongs in the non--consent category.

Very good start

But really should be in non consent.
I enjoyed reading it though, and would certainly read more chapters.
Well done and have 5 stars to encourage you!

Amazing

Please make more I would love to keep reading

Loved!

I loved this start! Can't wait to know how she's going to train her! Please keep writing!