All Comments on 'A New Day For The Brady Bunch'

by Rob Conner

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
it's original

I've never seen this approach taken to the Brady Bunch,Good Job!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Twisted but good

I really liked the twist on the Brady Bunch and now I can never watch the show without seeing this story in my head

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
great stuff

more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Absolutely brilliant!

It starts by leading you into a gentle direction of one idea and then launches you into a whirlwind of a a whole new life and world. Definitely keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
yes, more please

It was really good, i'd like to see you incorporate more of the family, but yea it was a very interesting direction to take.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
you rock

I loved it, do you have more?

trymostanythingtrymostanythingabout 19 years ago
great start

I'd love to see Carol have to "service" all the kids.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mistress Margo

Next time have Gregg turn marsha into his sex slave with cindy and jan as Mistress Margos sex slaves.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

Next time write one of jag mack as the Mistress Mack and Harm as her slave.

oldragraceroldragraceralmost 17 years ago
too funny

That was the funniest thing I ever read- never did like the Brady Bunch, and that was a great erotic twist on the show

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
...carol goes BLACK!!!...

...she is submitted to BLACK WORSHIP!!!...the imagination runs wild!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
aitch'em says:

Nice and kinky story, good plot, rich prose - continue the good work and come up with a follow-up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This Is A Great Start

Now do The Big Bang Theory. I have Bernadette and Stewart having a revenge sex affair after Bernadette catches Howard in bed with Rajesh. Amy Farrah Fowler, trying to be a 'bad girl' has brief affairs with Zach, and Penny's giant boyfriend, Penny's brother, Krempke, and the motorcycle riding Particle Physicist. Dr. Elizabeth Plimpton enjoys going through the stellar cast. Lucy, Alex, Dr. Plimpton, Sarah (not that anyone cares) , Mrs. Latham and others pick up the pieces of Leonard's heart after Penny gets drunk at a Halloween party and has a very public gangbang.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Not great at all; personally I would prefer seeing Mike and Carol have sex with Bobby and Cindy.

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