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A New Day For The Brady Bunch

byRob Conner©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/26/04

it's original

I've never seen this approach taken to the Brady Bunch,Good Job!!!!!

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by Anonymous04/09/04

Twisted but good

I really liked the twist on the Brady Bunch and now I can never watch the show without seeing this story in my head

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by Anonymous05/28/04

great stuff

more please

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by Anonymous07/12/04

Absolutely brilliant!

It starts by leading you into a gentle direction of one idea and then launches you into a whirlwind of a a whole new life and world. Definitely keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous10/03/04

yes, more please

It was really good, i'd like to see you incorporate more of the family, but yea it was a very interesting direction to take.

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by Anonymous01/22/05

you rock

I loved it, do you have more?

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by trymostanything02/05/05

great start

I'd love to see Carol have to "service" all the kids.

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by Anonymous09/23/06

Mistress Margo

Next time have Gregg turn marsha into his sex slave with cindy and jan as Mistress Margos sex slaves.
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
Next time write one of jag mack as the Mistress Mack and Harm as her slave.

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by oldragracer07/02/07

too funny

That was the funniest thing I ever read- never did like the Brady Bunch, and that was a great erotic twist on the show

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by Anonymous12/22/08

...carol goes BLACK!!!...

...she is submitted to BLACK WORSHIP!!!...the imagination runs wild!!!!

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by Anonymous08/03/11

aitch'em says:

Nice and kinky story, good plot, rich prose - continue the good work and come up with a follow-up.

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