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by swingerjoe04/28/14

It's an interesting premise, and a nice twist on the usual formula, but I felt like you rushed through it. Slow it down a little, and include more details about what the characters are seeing and feeling as the action happens, and it would make a better story.

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by Pulsifer4210/11/14

Outstanding Debut

I found the "rushing" aspect to increase the heat and intensity of the moment.
Nicely done. Look forward to more of your wordsmithing in the near future.

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