Susan's done it again with another super stimulating, hot and very erotic chapter !
This chapter is just the start of what desperate Mom's will do to 'help protect' their sons from the evil of painted ladies, booze and whoring around. A superb and enticing section by one of Literotica's best authors, has me anxious to see what the Mom's Audrey, Brenda, Carol, Kathy, Jennifer along with Mother Julia and special friend Christine have spun in their slutty, sinister and sexy minds! Personally think Audrey needs some 'coaching or coaxing' from Gary or one of the other nephews. Why do a foresee a 'gang bang' coming (no pun here!) at Grandma Julia's soon :) Only our Five Star writer knows for sure - so stay tuned folks and enjoy the ride! Thanks for the smiles SJP ! :) :) Smiling Jaybird :) :)
I grew a little weary of your restating so many things again and again. If you had a little more confidence that your readers could remember those details, instead of repeating them sometimes three times, the writing would be better. I understand this problem because I have had it too - trying to be sure that the reader gets the details. But please understand, the reader gets it - you don't have to repeat it.
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Susan's done it again with another super stimulating, hot and very erotic chapter !
This chapter is just the start of what desperate Mom's will do to 'help protect' their sons from the evil of painted ladies, booze and whoring around. A superb and enticing section by one of Literotica's best authors, has me anxious to see what the Mom's Audrey, Brenda, Carol, Kathy, Jennifer along with Mother Julia and special friend Christine have spun in their slutty, sinister and sexy minds! Personally think Audrey needs some 'coaching or coaxing' from Gary or one of the other nephews. Why do a foresee a 'gang bang' coming (no pun here!) at Grandma Julia's soon :) Only our Five Star writer knows for sure - so stay tuned folks and enjoy the ride! Thanks for the smiles SJP ! :) :) Smiling Jaybird :) :)
A good start but I hope that in future chapters there will be less thinking/talking and more action.
Like the premise...
I grew a little weary of your restating so many things again and again. If you had a little more confidence that your readers could remember those details, instead of repeating them sometimes three times, the writing would be better. I understand this problem because I have had it too - trying to be sure that the reader gets the details. But please understand, the reader gets it - you don't have to repeat it.
I will continue reading because I like the idea.
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