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Lepidopterological Perturbation

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by greenmountaineer04/29/14

What I like about this is how the complicated title re-enforces the paradox of the narrative written simply.

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by Angeline05/01/14

This is excellent

It feels like a koan to me, something I could meditate on. Anyway it is wonderful, spare yet full of meaning. I also agree with gm that there is great synergy between the title and the poem.

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