All Comments on 'My Gym Teacher'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This needs work and lots of it.

You could have set the mood better about the last week of school and set up why you liked her and praised her attractiveness.You could have said something about why you chose a gay experience and not a heterosexual one. Was it because she was there or something else.. I take it you were hairless down there-how did that come about what brought that on and related to your sexual self awareness. Why is she anonymous? Give her a name.

Was she a good coach? Did she teach you how to win? What was she like during the games. Did you admire her butt or legs or besom. What did she do when she took deep breaths.

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