First Blush Ch. 02

Happy

I love your characters. Not just in this story, but all of them. They have so much life and quirkiness. I hope to read more of this story in the future.

I like the characters and you describe well emotions. I loved the humour, the geek ideais fresh. Thank you for writing, can't wait for next chapter

Love Eli

So much! I can't wait to see where these two go !

Oh man! Is that it ?? We don't get to see if they continue a relationship? I don't know if it ever said that he had been visiting for the wedding of his cousin, so when greg asked him to move out there 'in his dreams' would he have to build a life near Greg? Did Greg want more and was the love that he felt for Greg just that puppy dog love one can feel for their first? I'd love to see you take this story a bit further. These two were a bit cheesy throughout, but it seemed like they both were, so they fit lol. Nice story.

MJ, four stars only nc it was so short. I think he should hold out on moving for him though. He just met the man. Has no idea how he feels, be a little cautious. Great character development as usual

rarely

loved the way the story moved and flowed. loved the descriptions and most of all loved the characters. damn wish i were Eli such a lucky man to have found someone to lead him to romance. now are we going to find out more? please?

Caring lover

I've been blessed with being introduced to love much as you describe in this story. I tried to resist falling in love, our situations were impossible, but so was resisting. Thank you for the story.

Blissed out and sweating honey. This story is….(insert appropriate sound effects and writhing here)