Love your stories and look forward to the next one.
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Anonymous04/30/14
your fab
just about to good for wards you have written some of the best incest stories I have read can note weighed to read the rest of this one sexy and very hot to boot PLS can you keep it uy yours lea5red mawh xx
couldnt get into this one.her b/f and parents all belong to a secret society and she never hard of it or was prepped for her time to join it?her dad chose her b/f oh please.please dont continue this since it will just be the same thing over and over.i mean what else can happen to her she has already fucked like 50 people ,been turned into an incest fucked cum dump,pussy eating, brood mare that hasnt got knocked up by whichever guy she fucks at the right/wrong time.
SSL, you are a great writer. But it seems like you a reusing ideas here. Because the tone of this story was fairly close to your story you published not long ago about a white lawyer getting gang bang by black lawyers who had an secret order that ran that city. Through the sex is fairly different the idea that starts it is close to that one.
One of the reasons I like your work is because not only is the quality great but it's something different everytime. This just seem like a recycled idea here with only a change or two.If you are out of ideas for the moment it would be time to take a break from your writing and refresh. I have to do this in my own writing which is posted more on sci fi sights than here on Literotica. But a refresh of your mind might be in order her. Take a week or two, don't write anything just focus on other things you enjoy then come back with some fresh ideas.
If you can't walk away from writing here is an idea I would like to see you write. I would like you to see you write a story about a female political figure, governor, house member or something like that come to finding their husband fucking someone else then in the break up become a lesbian sub to some college student or some such. It would be a nice change of pace from your lawyer/teacher standards.
I love that you have dived straight into the gritty sex, keep going please as soon as possible june is to far away
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Anonymous05/01/14
What a fucking lovely story! I fucking loved it a lot!
What a great strory!I loved the way you got into right away without wasting time !Brittany really got into it didnt she and she really enjoyed being used by everyone !Keep the stories cumming and cumming and cumming and cumming ! I know I did several times in fact and Im ready to cum again ! Keep up the writing of the stories ,Thanks again ! Oh Im cumming again !And it feels good!
And I wish you would stop thanking your team of editors, because they aren't doing a very good job, unless of course, your raw work is truly aweful
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Anonymous05/05/14
Loved It
I was wet from the moment Brittany's father had her strip. I came when Brittany first came and at the end when her face was nestled between her mother's legs licking her pussy. I am anxious to read of her punishment for coming without permission. Your friend Annbe60.
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Anonymous05/06/14
Great!!
Dunno why people are so butt-hurt over this, thought it was great! Keep up the good work!! :)
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Anonymous05/07/14
you need to go back to developing characters
Look i love your work... always look for your new stories. but lately you been getting to lazy in developing your characters. If you want to make a great stroke stories you are doing fine.. but writing great, well written stories you are getting away from.
i really do love you and your stories.. just need to take a bit more time and actually develop the people in them and not make them caricatures.
This is supposed to be a stroke story unlike some of my longer works, as was white sluts club. On the other hand, Incest Submission, upcoming sequel to Bedding the Babysitter and my first incest love story are about character development.
I try to write a diverse range of stories in length, character and plot. While I understand not all my stories will impress everymr, I hope the majority do.
Again thanks for the comments...
Jasmine may 2014
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Anonymous05/18/14
Great story keep on making them!
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Anonymous05/21/14
I enjoyed the story and am very much looking forward to reading the rest of the stories. I do hope you will continue with the other days of the week so we can hear what all she has to do in becoming a member of this society.
Dany54
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Anonymous05/24/14
amazing
This was amazingly written and so so hot. I cannot wait to read how she submitts even further in all ways. Keep it up vinomoda
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Anonymous06/12/14
Can tell you without any reservations,
Virtually anything you write will be read, enjoyed, and stimulated. Just as so aptly stated by Robert Frost, "And miles to go before I sleep, and miles to go before I sleep".
I am glad I read this first as suggested in the next episode. I absolutely love your writing. I get sidetracked with going to the "Similar Stories," but every time I keep coming back to you. I am really happy that you are such a popular writer on Literotica. It means you are going to be writing here a long time.
by
Anonymous07/07/14
More more more oh please write more to this
I love your stories, your writing is fantastic and this series of stories has started amazingly and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories in this series,
Wed Bride Submission: Family Orgy
Thu Bride Submission: In-law Gangbang
Fri Bride Submission: Lesbian Fistful
Sat Bride Submission: Pre-Wedding Sin
Sat Bride Submission: Wedding Day Orgy
Later Bride Submission: Wife of Syndom
You are the best author on this site
by
Anonymous07/10/14
Our thing is not incest
Our mom taught me and my sister that it's okay to please your husband with anal sex. So it been times when me and my mom and sister walk around the house with our butt plugs in place. And you can clearly see them their in our asshole. Mom said be ready to please your husband when he good to you.
by
Anonymous09/10/14
Please...
Please please continue this series - never been more turned on by a story. I liked the sequel, but this story is just perfect
by
Anonymous09/21/14
this is sick no rating
by
Anonymous01/28/15
suprise!
It amazes me each one of your stories get better than the last. Please continue your writing
by
Anonymous02/01/15
Great Stories
As usual anther great story from one of my favorite authors..................Larry pcb_beachbum2002@yahoo.com
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Anonymous04/14/15
The best
This is the best story! Please continue the series! I'll even help read things before they get published.
You are one of my favorite authors. This has the potential to be a really great series. Until I started reading your stories, I had no idea that submission would interest me. More please!
I never toughtt I would enjoy the scenario but god am I looking forward to the next one.
Keep it up literaly
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Anonymous03/03/16
beulahthebrit
SSL, I love your stories, they are well written,with good character development and recently I have discovered the line that you have covering incest. They are so horny, that I am sopping wet from the start and although I'm up for anything as an only child of aged parents, I missed the chance. This has the potential to run for at least a dozen chapters, so keep up the good work.
Marvelous. I think this could be one of your best series. Your writing is usually erotically inspired, but this stands above most. Thank you for the VERY pleasant hours of very erotic reading you've given Me...
Your stories sound so life like. I certainly would love to have had an Order such as the one you described in this story. It is so erotic and can just imagine how a submissive woman would react to such an arrangement. It would be so wonderful having a constant supply of sexual release.
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Anonymous12/18/16
Bride submission
When will you publish more of Bride submission. They are the best.
English
where's the feminist
Don't write anymore unless your going to let her kick them all in ball including her father and tell them and the entire order to fry in hell!
Loved it!!
Another Great one
Loved it J
Love your stories and look forward to the next one.
your fab
just about to good for wards you have written some of the best incest stories I have read can note weighed to read the rest of this one sexy and very hot to boot PLS can you keep it uy yours lea5red mawh xx
Don't Know
How it could get better without being redundant, but I look forward to see how you will obviously do it. Thanks
couldnt get into this one.her b/f and parents all belong to a secret society and she never hard of it or was prepped for her time to join it?her dad chose her b/f oh please.please dont continue this since it will just be the same thing over and over.i mean what else can happen to her she has already fucked like 50 people ,been turned into an incest fucked cum dump,pussy eating, brood mare that hasnt got knocked up by whichever guy she fucks at the right/wrong time.
Wonderful
Love the story,
Love it!
I like the storyline, lots of potential happenings. Thanks and keep up the good work!
2*s
I'm sorry, but it's just too misogynistic for me, I can only give it 2 stars.
Next
Wednesday: Bosses Bitch!
As far as the story goes....OMG, it is no wonder you are my favorite author.
great
Loved the plot...my imagination went wild with my own private additions
SSL, you are a great writer. But it seems like you a reusing ideas here. Because the tone of this story was fairly close to your story you published not long ago about a white lawyer getting gang bang by black lawyers who had an secret order that ran that city. Through the sex is fairly different the idea that starts it is close to that one.
One of the reasons I like your work is because not only is the quality great but it's something different everytime. This just seem like a recycled idea here with only a change or two.If you are out of ideas for the moment it would be time to take a break from your writing and refresh. I have to do this in my own writing which is posted more on sci fi sights than here on Literotica. But a refresh of your mind might be in order her. Take a week or two, don't write anything just focus on other things you enjoy then come back with some fresh ideas.
If you can't walk away from writing here is an idea I would like to see you write. I would like you to see you write a story about a female political figure, governor, house member or something like that come to finding their husband fucking someone else then in the break up become a lesbian sub to some college student or some such. It would be a nice change of pace from your lawyer/teacher standards.
Keep it going
Sounds to me like an 8 part series!!
Slithy
I gotta agree with Slithy, this one was just too much overkill for my tastes.
Straight in
I love that you have dived straight into the gritty sex, keep going please as soon as possible june is to far away
What a fucking lovely story! I fucking loved it a lot!
What a great strory!I loved the way you got into right away without wasting time !Brittany really got into it didnt she and she really enjoyed being used by everyone !Keep the stories cumming and cumming and cumming and cumming ! I know I did several times in fact and Im ready to cum again ! Keep up the writing of the stories ,Thanks again ! Oh Im cumming again !And it feels good!
Bride to be - hmmm
Wow this is a hot story - yes to more; love your writing.
love it
I look forward to the next instalment of this story.
Far, FAR from your best work
You should just stop right here
And I wish you would stop thanking your team of editors, because they aren't doing a very good job, unless of course, your raw work is truly aweful
Loved It
I was wet from the moment Brittany's father had her strip. I came when Brittany first came and at the end when her face was nestled between her mother's legs licking her pussy. I am anxious to read of her punishment for coming without permission. Your friend Annbe60.
Great!!
Dunno why people are so butt-hurt over this, thought it was great! Keep up the good work!! :)
you need to go back to developing characters
Look i love your work... always look for your new stories. but lately you been getting to lazy in developing your characters. If you want to make a great stroke stories you are doing fine.. but writing great, well written stories you are getting away from.
i really do love you and your stories.. just need to take a bit more time and actually develop the people in them and not make them caricatures.
Authors note
Thanks all who commended, positive and negative.
This is supposed to be a stroke story unlike some of my longer works, as was white sluts club. On the other hand, Incest Submission, upcoming sequel to Bedding the Babysitter and my first incest love story are about character development.
I try to write a diverse range of stories in length, character and plot. While I understand not all my stories will impress everymr, I hope the majority do.
Again thanks for the comments...
Jasmine may 2014
Great story keep on making them!
I enjoyed the story and am very much looking forward to reading the rest of the stories. I do hope you will continue with the other days of the week so we can hear what all she has to do in becoming a member of this society.
Dany54
amazing
This was amazingly written and so so hot. I cannot wait to read how she submitts even further in all ways. Keep it up vinomoda
Can tell you without any reservations,
Virtually anything you write will be read, enjoyed, and stimulated. Just as so aptly stated by Robert Frost, "And miles to go before I sleep, and miles to go before I sleep".
Bride Submission
I am glad I read this first as suggested in the next episode. I absolutely love your writing. I get sidetracked with going to the "Similar Stories," but every time I keep coming back to you. I am really happy that you are such a popular writer on Literotica. It means you are going to be writing here a long time.
More more more oh please write more to this
I love your stories, your writing is fantastic and this series of stories has started amazingly and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories in this series,
Wed Bride Submission: Family Orgy
Thu Bride Submission: In-law Gangbang
Fri Bride Submission: Lesbian Fistful
Sat Bride Submission: Pre-Wedding Sin
Sat Bride Submission: Wedding Day Orgy
Later Bride Submission: Wife of Syndom
You are the best author on this site
Our thing is not incest
Our mom taught me and my sister that it's okay to please your husband with anal sex. So it been times when me and my mom and sister walk around the house with our butt plugs in place. And you can clearly see them their in our asshole. Mom said be ready to please your husband when he good to you.
Please...
Please please continue this series - never been more turned on by a story. I liked the sequel, but this story is just perfect
this is sick no rating
suprise!
It amazes me each one of your stories get better than the last. Please continue your writing
Great Stories
As usual anther great story from one of my favorite authors..................Larry pcb_beachbum2002@yahoo.com
The best
This is the best story! Please continue the series! I'll even help read things before they get published.
You are one of my favorite authors. This has the potential to be a really great series. Until I started reading your stories, I had no idea that submission would interest me. More please!
Oh god I loved it! My idea of heaven.
Loved it
I never toughtt I would enjoy the scenario but god am I looking forward to the next one.
Keep it up literaly
beulahthebrit
SSL, I love your stories, they are well written,with good character development and recently I have discovered the line that you have covering incest. They are so horny, that I am sopping wet from the start and although I'm up for anything as an only child of aged parents, I missed the chance. This has the potential to run for at least a dozen chapters, so keep up the good work.
More
Want more of this series
Waiting on the next chapters!
You promised us more, when is it coming? Can't wait!
Please write them all!
I would love for you to write them all PLEASE! I can't wait to read them.
Pls write : Thu Bride Submission: In-law Gangbang
Thu Bride Submission: In-law Gangbang
Write them all
Write them all
Excellent Series Start
Marvelous. I think this could be one of your best series. Your writing is usually erotically inspired, but this stands above most. Thank you for the VERY pleasant hours of very erotic reading you've given Me...
Love this concept.I
Your stories sound so life like. I certainly would love to have had an Order such as the one you described in this story. It is so erotic and can just imagine how a submissive woman would react to such an arrangement. It would be so wonderful having a constant supply of sexual release.
Bride submission
When will you publish more of Bride submission. They are the best.
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