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You're story isn't very good... i've read tons of bdsm stories...
Though I don't know what's wrong with it...
She's too much of a real whore!!
Oh no, Mr Bill!
She broke already? Darn. It's not too late to have her nut up and fight some more. Fight, Viv, fight! At least break a leg off the furniture and pith Missy...
so she already broke.
This is not a criticism, because I do love the story and think it's well written, but it's a bit disappointing that she already broke. Was looking forward to seeing her overcome her challenges
Yes, I agree. I stopped this chapter too early, the scene continues in the next chapter. This was my mistake.
Love it!!!
Very erotic with a great story line, please keep them coming :)
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